RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 106 remake !
🕑 Added 2019-12-27 23:31:51 +0000 UTCAs has become the norm... there's very little left of the old page. The bakground of the first panel and the speech/ text. There's also not much to be said about most changes so I'm not gonna drown you in useless trivia to explain every little improvements.
All panels are basically straight upgrade. The camera is slightly pulled back on panel 2 so that the cheeky peen is more front and centered. It gives a better impression of motion and it looks hotter cos I draw penis bigger and gooder than i used to. Panel 3 is basically the same story as panel 2, angle is pushed back for a better view of the scene as a whole. It makes the page look less cramped and there's simply more body to see, which, yaknow, in porn, is nice.
So yeah, that's that !
Comments
RodVonBoche
Yup. Penis hitting the eye is in You Ain't Got Me.
Eldkatten
Ooooh, and here I am again having missundestood something all the time. In the old version, I thought that Zee's "peen" pokes Larsen in the eye, which for me was confirmed by Larsen's red eye in the next panel. Having the new version now, I understand that the penis never hit the eye, but the cheek only, because Larsen's left eye is shut, and Larsen's pupils both are red and have been red all the time. What a relief! And I appreciate that Zee doesn't look like holding a selfie-stick anymore in the new version of the last panel.
RodVonBoche
It was the only think mhokay enough to keep
Nicthalon
I love that the only thing that's completely unchanged in the second set is "hmmokay!"
