RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 49 remade + 45 + some modification on 47
🕑 Added 2020-07-15 01:54:59 +0000 UTCFirst of all, I posted 45 hd in there :
Second of everything, I modified 47 some more since the first time I posted it here. Some tiny stuff that looked off I changed. I won't detail, you can just see it above.
Third of entirety; 49 ! It took me forever to do and I don't know why precisely cos it's not too different from the original at first glance. You'd think it'd be one of the relatively easy ones but no. There's almost nothing left of the old page, just the contour of the panels and one or two words here and there. The characters and backgrounds are entirely new.
There's not that much to be said about most panels that isn't "it's the same but newer" so I'll just detail the one that shows a notable difference, the 3rd one. I changed the angle cos the original didn't seem that interesting and Zee being stuck the the side of the page felt weird, plus the "no signal" of the TV just looked a little too proeminent. So it's a top down view now, kind of. It's not a very good top down view despite it taking me forever to do but fuck it.
I also changed Zee's expression and removed the thought bubble because it just came accross as a little too casual for the situation, I wanted him to seem a lot more euphoric.
So yeah. That's all I got !
Comments
RodVonBoche
Yep, and the inner Larsen seems pretty happy to be there
Eldkatten
Ohmy, I didn't realize in the old version that Larsen, after a first hesitation in panel 1, really throws himself into it. Such a passionate face, first clearly visible in the new version. Of course he switches back to his usual angry self when interrupted by Zee in panels 4 and 5, but I think we see a first glimpse of the inner Larsen in panel 2 here.
RodVonBoche
I'll change it when it gets posted everywhere
matt
hmmm you kept "I didn't mean to haste you" in, eh? still feels a bit like a ESL typo, honestly - or a shoutout to final fantasy - but you're the boss.
Jarrod
Great change to panel 3. The euphoria definitely comes across in the drawing. You're right in that the changes at first glance aren't astounding, but a closer look shows that like every line was changed, so I'm sure this took a looooooot of work. Looks great, RVB.
