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Disintegrity 88 remastered !
🕑 Added 2019-09-06 13:08:54 +0000 UTCPay no mind to the cover page, which is old 87, it's one of those in the seuqence that's new, 88. It's just for readability's sake.
So this one took a while. I didi finish it yesterday night but... at 4am... I think you can figure out why just by looking, but here goes the breakdown anyway.
First of all, almost everything is entirely redone. It's faster to count what remains than what changed :
The "hmmm" in the first panel
-The black circle that makes the 3rd and 4th panel
-The lyrics around the third panel
-The "nh ?" in the 4th.
That's it. Everything else is new. But sure I'll call it a remaster yaknow that makes sense
ANYWAY, why did it change ? Well, this is basically a serie of three page where nothing but kissing happens, 87-88-89.
In all of them, there is one panel that basically takes half the page showing the kiss. I kept it in 87, I kept it in 89 but I figure it was unecessarily repetitive so 88's a break ! Plus it didn't seem necessary to have such a big panel when Larsen was unsure of himself. So, it shrunk. I also opened Larsen's eye to make him look less confident in his kiss too.
Then I added a panel cos I had to and I wanted to have Zee grab his butt. Don't pay attention to how awkward Zee looks in that panel, he's hidden behind Larsen so fuck it, it'll do.
Third panel is basically completely different from its original. I liked the original but I prefer the larger pose of the new one, it's sexier, plus the original's is basically redone in the new 89 anyway so it'd be redundant. The dialogue is also changed to indicate that Larsen is likely backing off from the kiss (with some hints that he doesnt want to...) to explain better what happens in the last panel. I wonder if it doesn't detract a bit from how romantic the kiss is supposed to be with him monologuing so much but it always ends on Zee catching his tongue in the end so... yay ?
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Eldkatten
*....* (basically speechless) This has become so great! (Don't ruin your health, though, by working all night. Say "Yes, granny" ;-) ) I switch between the versions just to see how marvelous this page has become. For me, it has gotten much clearer now why Zee has to catch Larsen's tongue. All in all I like how Larsen's front Mr. Toughguy melts away. I don't think the inner monologe disturbs the romantics, because Larsen's thoughts reveal how much he cares. And oh, the face of Larsen's in that last pannel :-) I know it's actually the same expression as in the old version, but with the finer lines and the changed eyes it looks so adorable.
