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Disintegrity 1-2 hi-res !

🕑 Added 2019-08-31 01:42:01 +0000 UTC

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RodVonBoche

To be fair, I think it's pretty typical of mangas to have this kind of "emotional" background so it's not exactly very creative of me. It just fits.

RodVonBoche

Also an explanation for that, Larsen could have easily bullied whoever was next to Zee's locker so that he could install himself there and have an excuse to be close.

RodVonBoche

Well, Zee would never write "I will kill you" so yeah, it's a fair guess to say that this isn't his typical handwriting. It's not even his typical writing period ! Not that this really went into considezation when I created the scene mind you, but hey ! There's an explanation for it so I'll take credit for accidental thoughtfulness anyway

Eldkatten

And again, I noticed something I didn't before: I never saw the flames in the background on page 2, pannel 1 :-o I never wondered whether the school is on fire all of a sudden, and why. Because the flames fit so well, that I percieve them as emanation of Larsen's fury without even becoming aware of them. So great!

Eldkatten

And do they really have their lockers next to each other? Amazing, how did that happen? Can't be in alphabetical order ;-) Unless... of course, if Zee's last name is "Lakota", and there is noone in between :-)

Eldkatten

Ha! Don't tell me you changed nothing ;-) Pg 2: Color of Zee's tongue, Larsen's hand shoving the note in Zee's face, Larsen's hair. All for the better, of course :-) What I allways wanted to know: Why can't Zee write straight? I mean, that note looks like it was written by a first grader. Does Zee try to conceal his own handwriting, so Larsen won't know who wrote it? Larsen ought to know Zee's hand, since we get to know that he wrote love letters in Zee's name (in order to embarrass him), probably copying Zee's hand writing. But maybe I'm interpreting to much again into small unimportant details :-)