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Disintegrity 82 remade !
🕑 Added 2019-06-12 00:20:59 +0000 UTCThat first panel was one that bothered me without me completely hating it cos I liked the way the tail looked. But what's the pose ! That pose just doesn't make any sense. That was one of those "I need to use some crazy weird perspective cos that's raaaadical and dynamic duuuude" but... why ? Just cos that's what I do, even if it adds NOTHING to the scene.
So I fix. The angle is still exagerated but I don't think it looks incomprehensible anymore, the pose makes sense, the fish-eye effect looks weird with the table but not with the characters so I'm fine with it ! Plus larsen got a better butthole. Back then that was when I just started drawing butts and holes better, but it wasn't... good yet. Page 107 is the first one where I thought "hey, that's a good butt" (but everything around that butthole is bad...)
Panel 2 is just a banal upgrade. Then I recolored the words in the middle cos the orange was a bit searing.
I tend to hate the faces in most of these old pages. That third panel is one of those. Just hate Larsen's face. I could hardly explain why, it's just ugly is all. On the other hand Panel 4's Zee is still... meh. Nowhere near good, but not hateworthy. Still I'm always happy to floof him up in those redraw. His hair is one of the main reason I wanted to redo this comic, cos I never liked how I did them. I always wanted them to floof but for some reason I just... didn't do it. I was trying, it just didn't happen.
Finally, last panel is the only one on that page that isn't entirely redone. There's still some of that old lineart and coloring in there. Funfact (or at least fact, don't know if it's any fun), I think I was streaming me drawing this page and someone in the chat said that Zee's line in panel four was cheesy, which made me realize that Larsen would probably comment on that too. So I added the "fucking cheesy" bit. There. That was a fact. Someone kinda ghost wrote that line.
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matt
I've definitely been noticing how much better his hair is in the redo - man sometimes, these remind me of the difference between original Final Fantasy 7 and the remastered HD version? Like - I always knew that's what Cloud looked like, but now I can really *see* it with all the fine detail, and it looks *right* I guess?
