RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 47 remake
🕑 Added 2019-04-25 01:20:55 +0000 UTCThis time again, there simply isn't much to be said, except that it took me wwwway longer than it should have but in terms of changes, nothing particularly needs explanation. The only thing that really changed are the character's expressions; Larsen looks less horrified in P1, he now looks reluctant but not afraid; Zee is not merely surprised in P5, he's also a bit excited. Also looking at both pages makes me realize that the change in shading makes the composition of P5 less clear than before but whatever, I don't care enough to redo it.
It's not even one of those pages that aged too badly, the original is still... fffffffine. Nothing worth stopping over one way or another.
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RodVonBoche
Probably. I remember finding it hard to write the proper word there back then, in french it was easier to convey the meaning properly. But whatever, I'm not changing it.
matt
'haste' is weird here - did you mean 'hasten' or 'hassle' or 'hurry'?
Eldkatten
I do like the change in their facial expressions. And though you're right about P5, but for me the panel is easier to read in the new version. Great work, again :-)
