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Disintegrity 121 remaster + 20 HD
🕑 Added 2019-12-07 21:34:25 +0000 UTCFirst off, I posted Disintegrity 20 HD there :
I'm not gonna post a dedicated blog about it beyond that.
Anyway, 121 ! This time I'm not gonna go over the mundane upgrade, most of it is self-explanatory.
The more interesting notes have zero to do with the actual drawing but more with the layout. For example I added some grungyness to the first panel's line, as to show Zee's growing frustration.
The bubbles have been re-arranged as well, I find that the original page's bubbles were not arranged for proper reading from panel 2 to 3 since it was supposed to go from "it doesn't matter what you say you want" to "cos i want you" but you had to take your eyes from one side of the page to the other. I kinda prefer it flowing more directly into one another.
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Eldkatten
"added some grungyness to the first panel's line", indeed you did, such a subtle but yet effectfull change! I won't go on about the faces again, I said it so many times before... allright, I do: the faces show much clearer now the emotions, and they look much cuter, even grumpy, angry Zee :-)
