RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 32 remake !
🕑 Added 2019-11-19 23:42:32 +0000 UTCSO. There's really little that necessitates and explanation in terms of the changes done. The biggest one really is right below the panel, the "cuddle.exe" line was removed cos... It's become too lol randum XD for me. So it's gone.
The last panel also has a different, less garrish background, it makes the page look a fair bit less busy.
That's really all there is to say about it !
Comments
RodVonBoche
He probably puts it on the sofa. Do't think about it too hard cos I suuuure didn't
Eldkatten
Very nice! The faces are a lot better, and everything from the setting to the movements are much clearer. Thanks a lot! One question, though: where is the cup of hot chocolate? In pages 30 and 31 Larsen holds it in his left hand, in pages 33 and 34 he holds it now with his right hand, lifting it high up to try not to spill the hot fluid (before he throws it in Zee's face in page 35). I allways liked that detail, and still do :-) In page 32 originally the cup wasn't shown, and only Larsen's - empty - right hand can be seen, so one could assume that he was still holding the cup in his left hand, passing it to his right hand between pages 32 and 33, to get it out of the way of Zee's cuddling. Long story short: in the new page 32 Larsen uses both his hands to pull Zee's sweater trying to get him off, no cup in either of them. Where did it go, and why is it back in the next page? P.S.: I also liked the "cuddle.exe"-line, but maybe because I'm an old school command line guy ;-)
matt
what you want... is dumb! 😻 and things feel a lot less muddled, artwise here. these are some solid upgrades.
