RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 55
🕑 Added 2019-03-06 01:11:03 +0000 UTCThis is one page where a lot of my attempts to put in some exaggerated perspective just fall flat. Panel 2 for example has Zee's ass suddenly gets down with the thickness in a disturbing way. His bottom is just suddenly massive.
The next panel has a similar problem, perhaps less ugly tho. But Zee's position is hard to make sense of. It didn't work too bad if you just skim over but it's not good.
The next panel has's Larsen on the foreground looking awkward as hell. The arm just doesn't look right. Then you've got Zee's puffy dumb face. So it's better now, even tho I still don't feel like this page is super good. But whatever, it's not one I'm so invested into as to perfect it.
Which is also why the next panel has this weird perspective issue still ! Where Larsen and the sofa don't look properly lying on the floor. I just don't care enough.
Anyway ! That's all I got. I'm writing an update right now along with the suggestion, cos I have some news to tell cos I'm moving home and that'll keep me busy.
