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The Futa Famiy Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2022-06-16 23:00:23 +0000 UTC

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MisterretsiM

Always appreciated, thank you! Sending you stories now!

mortl

+1 new subscriber

GerardV

I just subscribed too. Could I get the link?

Hello, just joined the patreon, could I get a link to this story please

MisterretsiM

Hahaha. The whole original idea for the story was based off the broken borrowed onahole concept

florgenstow420

I had a feeling there was gonna be that reveal about the smaller sister...

heromanbunny

Hello, just joined the patreon, could I get a link to this story please

John Saber

May I get the link please? I just subscribed.

MisterretsiM

Thank you very much! Funny enough one of the first big "edits" I did was spacing out some of the info dump stuff - originally a lot of Izzy's musings on the nature of her family were before she talked to Doug. Definitely something I've been trying to conciously work on. Happy to hear that! Have plenty more planned haha

MisterretsiM

Fair! But this chapter is pretty well self-contained with sex and such. Only a small sort of lead up to the second chapter in it

novaforce555

This was a good first chapter. My own writing aspirations tend to crumble whenever it comes to setting up original works. It's very hard to invite intrigue to the story without overloading the first quarter with information. Pacing it out is something I need to work on. I say this because you did a swell job with it. I am invested in seeing familial drama as well as hyper shenanigans, perhaps even due to said shenanigans. Looking forward to more!

maners bams

K I’ll probably wait for chapter 2 before reading this chapter 1 always has cliffhangers

MisterretsiM

Thank you! Glad you liked the characterization of Izzy and Doug. Funny enough, this entire concept is a much older one of mine, from before I started writing, and my original idea was to have Isabella be much more stereotypically mean/dominant in nature. But you know after doing that for some time in other stories, I wanted to make her a bit different haha. I understand completely, and I do feel the same sometimes. I appreciate the compliments and insight :)

MisterretsiM

Glad you enjoyed Condom ch5 so much :) and I'm happy to hear my attempts at making Victoria a more complex, semi-sympathetic character worked! Haha, I've said it in a few places but yeah, you're not wrong about that. I do enjoy making my OCs suffer before they can obtain happiness. And yeah, this story won't be light-hearted through and through, but I am going for something more casual, less "high stakes" in a sense. it was a nice change of pace for myself as well, because it does get tiring writing the mean and/or emotional stuff all the time. Awww thanks! I still need to play FF7R part 1 tbh. But I'm glad I could help make your day great!

HandsomeJack

Really enjoyed the vibe of this chapter and looking forward to seeing more. Is nice to see a character that are more caring and not just consumed by their lust or desire to dominate. Little details like Izzy mentioning being rejected in the past makes Doug wanting to have sex much more enjoyable, as well as her internal thoughts about Doug showing she thinks of him as a person and not just a object for her pleasure. Nothing wrong with stories like that (Have thoroughly enjoyed all your works) but my favourites stories of this genre are the ones that feel like they could take place in our world and not the cruel sex focused world found in the writings of many lewd authors.

Null805

Well I definitely wasn't expecting this so soon after Condom Ch 5. (Never got to commenting on it - but it was very good. Came for the smut, stayed for the gripping storytelling. Literally playing with my emotions). I'm not sure if it was on here, Twitter or on AO3, but I think I remember you talking about how dark and cruel your stories can be with how much you make your characters go through. I love those stories but this was definitely a nice change of pace since things seem to be more lighthearted for the most part (at least for now). Can't wait to read more about the other members of the family, and maybe even more of Isabella's and Dougs relationship if that's going to be a thing. PS. You have amazing timing btw. You posted this chapter the same day FF7R Part 2 and Dragons Dogma 2 got announced. You literally made an already pretty good day even better for me :)