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What Landlords Deserve

🕑 Added 2022-01-25 16:25:41 +0000 UTC

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MisterretsiM

Happy to hear you enjoyed it by the end. And yeah, this was definitely a long one haha. While I think, in retrospect, some of the build up could have been done better, I’m glad people seem to have found it well done in general.

novaforce555

NTR isn't my thing but it doesn't have to be for me to see this as high-quality. Took me awhile to get through but it was really well done. I like how it doesn't go straight to where you think it will right away, she works her way up the whole complex getting there, building anticipation and such. Good read!

MisterretsiM

Glad you enjoyed it even if it wasn't fully to your tastes!

florgenstow420

I'm not into NTR so I can't speak for the quality of those parts but the smut was pretty great!

Jvasskicker

Thanks 😁 Still planning out the chapters, but I already got her personality and design down, along with a few side characters that don't become her cock sleeve.

MisterretsiM

Yeah Johnny is definitely the type to go for a younger wife, even if its obvious he'll sleep with women of any age haha. Oooh that sounds exciting!

Jvasskicker

You're welcome 😁 Somehow, I'm not surprised of the large age gap between Johnny and Darla. Funny enough, the main character of one of the stories I'm planning out is a futa landlady~ 😉

MisterretsiM

Glad you liked it so much! Yeah, Johnny definitely got his comeuppance, even if there were some undeserved guys who got hit in the crossfire. As for ages, I imagined Johnny in his mid-40's, Darla in her earl 30's, and Jane in her mid-late 30's. That's great! I'm glad I could help inspire you! Always amazing to hear that <3

Jvasskicker

Like usual, the sex scene are damn amazing 👍 A+ and overall, this was a great read 👌 While Johnny got was he deserves, I do genuinely feel a bit bad for the other guys, though. Jane oddly gain some respect points for at least being self aware of her being a shitting person. Out of curiosity, how old is Jane? It feels like she in her 30s or older. Which is interesting has most stories I have read of older futas are usually milfs themselves. Side note, I have been really liking your stories. It brought some inspiration for me to write some futa stories of my own and to commission artwork of these characters I'm writing. And I'm bringing this up is because I have been through writer's burnt out, so I want to Thank You for reigniting my brunt mind a bit.

MisterretsiM

Thank you for the review! I was afraid no one liked the story haha I'm glad you liked Darla - I enjoyed writing a character that wasn't just an immediate slave to a futa haha. And yeah, Johnny definitely got what he deserved, even if Jane is arguably just as bad of a person, but at least at the end she admits it. She knows what she is and what she does, but like it said in the story, "it takes two to tango" Glad you enjoyed it!

maners bams

Tiny Review, this story is amazingly written with a nice cast, Darla the loving wife being my favorite character by far. I like how the progression of the story gave small hints into what was happening in the background before we actually got to witness jane doing exactly what she does best, cucking poor men. I don’t feel bad at all for the landlord since he had it coming but I do feel kinda bad for the other guys since they were all so excited too, and loyal. But them the breaks, when a futa’s in town best hide your wives and daughters. Not gonna lie I like an agreement gone wrong and lucy looks for love better though, it’s so much more wholesome and hits all my fetishes but still this was a pretty good read and too.