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Chapter 179: Parse. Fail. Repeat.

🕑 Added 2025-09-23 00:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Narf

I don't think there is a way to have both a perspective switch from the interlude and a timeskip of two weeks and not have it be an abrupt transition. I am fine with with that, although I still think that the timeskip could have been made more clear. That said, I too am sad that we skipped over right before Vasilisa and Jade meet again. I really wanted to see that.

Travis

Hmm tournament, using the goblet of fir.. err dragon fire yeah. 3 challenges? A ballroom dance and broomstick rideing? Your a wizard jadey.

StarWolf

I agree the transition between chapters needs work. I dislike jarring transitions it “knocks” one out of the story in effect.

Peter Smith

Im guessing something major happened at that time, maybe a secret that changes how we view their relationship, or an event that puts everything together, that will only be truly important later.

Peter Smith

Im assuming that vernia is jades twin sister. So if Jade was born without a core, they could have attempted to remove Jade's bloodline and placed it in her sister. However if they were targeting her Drakkari bloodline, then they essentially removed all impurity from her drakonic blood, which means she was stuck in a drakkari form, due to not having any magic, and more importantly it required a ceremony designed to touch the soul, while holding massive amounts of mana, in order for her body to become its most natural form.

Bramble

What if she doesn't look like the princess, but the princess looks like her? Like whatever they did/ took from Jade they transferred to Vernia?

Garnet of Flame

I have to agree that it feels like a chapter is missing. After all the build up about vasilisa being worried sick and thinking jade was dead, just skipping over the reunion feels lacking.

inkaral

I agree with Matt. Feels like a chappie is missing. Went from "she gets back and room is trashed" to interlude to "doing experiments, also, go put your name -blood- in the -Goblet of Fire- the Dragonfire.

matt

You skipped a chapter. Two interludes to NOT see their reunion? Booo.

NotSleepBTW

hey why can i edit this

jeffh4

Back in April, my Muse imagined pre-latest-evolution Jade’s meeting with Vasilisa and shared it with Mangowo.  Now that the story canon event has taken place, I can post that flight of fancy. https://docs.google.com/document/d/12TltCFTy3y_rBNC0ZJU9X2hFWZIoJJXJ/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=118353614122208422427&rtpof=true&sd=true

Shai182

TFTC! Paint the Walls with your Enemies Plan does have the Gremlin touch to it, but the new plan is a bit better 😎


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