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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 35

🕑 Added 2025-08-14 02:41:09 +0000 UTC

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Chase Kilgore

Thanks man! Made the fixes and I like the suggestion on the algorithm, will have to consider what to add

Brian T

I would bet it’s a slave collar. I really hope there isn’t an “Ash the slave doing things against his will” arc. I’m sure it would be written well, but I just hate those. And I especially don’t want Hitomi to get one over on Ash yet again.

Pixel

'stood a little straighter in her chair' - do you mean 'sat'? 'had, after all' - I might do a full stop here, but it's correct as it is 'She turned off the TV, which had been playing a random show based on her algorithm' - would be interesting to know what matches her algorithm ^^ Just as a little bonus characterization ^^

Not a clever man

that's right, with everything going on, I forgot not all council members are either part of this or fighting it. Loki appears to be one who is somewhat informed, but not involved in this directly. Wonder what the rest of the Council will think once this comes out...

Dre

Ah if course shes turned on by all this /jk maybe. But anyway I like Hitomi, good goals bad execution. Maybe this turns around, maybe it doesn't I honestly can't tell you.

Posiden 300

Im not sure if its a slave collar or its to suppress the elemental but with the changes with him I doubt it will do as intended.


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