SI2: Pleasure Land - p. 27-28 (new one)
🕑 Added 2024-12-12 00:16:08 +0000 UTCOk, now we're skipping several pages and see, what happens at the pool. In the previous version Grant was so scared that he went to his room, now I decided to show a bit more.
UPD: I fixed continuity in the panels. Now Betty is everywhere on Gran't left side :)
Comments
Alan
Ah! I understand. You do such expressive faces, I was surprised and thought it was a glitch. My personal preference is for the realistic portrayal, rather than abstract, as it stays in line with the realism of the rest of the images.
Tarusov
Yeah, it’s a common effect in anime/manga.. just used it for fun
Alan
Grant's face is smeared on the last panel of the first page. Is that intentional?
Tarusov
Thank you! I liked it too!
Roman
I think it’s great that we‘re revisiting older parts of the story and you’re showing scenes we haven’t seen before also really liked the cave scene
Tarusov
Yeah, I promise not to post like that anymore
Jens Bang
No worries. As long as you're aware of it. :-)
Bruno
It's definitely one of the things you most want to see Betty go through in this experience.
Tarusov
Yeah, sorry. I just posted it as a two page spread intentionally, because I was afraid that people will not see the second page, because the second one wouldn't be shown on email.
Jens Bang
Just a small thing from my perspective: I read these on a tablet, where a single page fits perfectly in portrait mode. But a double page, like this, means i either have to rotate the tablet for this single page, or zoom in. It's not a big problem, but it did break the reading experience for me.
Tarusov
Why do you think she would get a BBC on BDSM party? I never said that. She might, but we don't know.
Bruno
Isn't it time to go back to the room where the BDSM was? Everyone was waiting to see Betty get a BBC.
blackstone
Enrique should come on Betty more often 😏
Neb
Now that's an altermate trio of characters 🥵
Tarusov
Yeah, I should put more of her in the comics!
Alan
I love that redhead!
Peter Banting
I see. It’s just not on her in all but one panel.
Tarusov
it was on the previous page. Enrique came on her accidentally.
Peter Banting
Also, there’s some splooge on her chest that came out of knowhere
Tarusov
God.. I guess so.. I don't have other explanation.. Ok. I'll fix it
Peter Banting
Did she just teleport from his right side to his left on pg 28?