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LOG:03 Update Progression
🕑 Added 2019-02-18 06:13:09 +0000 UTCHey everyone! I am neck deep in LOG:03 revisions and wanted to share a peek at how the new version will look. This page here doesn't have a massive art change, I didn't redraw anything, but I did make the colours pop a lot more and fixed some atrocious word balloons.
The text changes don't alter the story, but I think they make the scene read better. That's one of the things I'm trying to do with the revised edition of each chapter, make it more readable. Plot points clearer.
Once the LOG:03 revisions are done and posted to the website I want to try and get the word out to more people. Maybe get some reviewers to to take a look and write about The Sprawl.
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It's kind of funny, going back to earlier chapters and seeing how much simpler the outfit designs were on most of the characters. I made the doberman character more detailed because I knew he wasn't going to be in other scenes. Laziness at work! Then you jump up to the more recent chapters and the outfits are all way more detailed.
