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Unruly Summon Chapter 12: Complexity

🕑 Added 2023-12-26 06:55:10 +0000 UTC

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cathfach

True, but he came back out again a few minutes later. Even if he'd recovered a bit in the meantime, Christine's 'Mary had no need to be' comment would have brought the bile right back up again.

Tim Burget

Something I noticed while rereading this chapter: > "He looked like he was going to throw up again, and this stupid outfit I have to wear is bad enough without being splashed by vomit." Possible continuity error? Thomas was described as having to fight down bile *after* he had already closed the changing room door.

MinE

P.s.s If they had food problems, why not summon food from Earth; they showed a surprising amount of flexibility with the ritual, so they should have at least tried that.

MinE

Thomas managed to accidentally charm the princess; his status as a hero better not work as magical charisma, or he might get guilty. P.s As soon as they started planning to kill Mary, they sabotaged their own plans.


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