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Unruly Summon Chapter 8: Magic

🕑 Added 2023-12-12 05:52:21 +0000 UTC

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cathfach

Bleh. It's supposed to be Dennis, but apparently I've flip-flopped. A search of the manuscript finds 14 Dennis's and 20 Denis's. :( Thanks for spotting that. Thankfully, it's easily find/replacable.

Tim Burget

Is the Minister's name "Dennis" or "Denis"? You keep calling him "Denis" in this chapter.

cathfach

Thaums are a discworld reference. Other places use the word, but discworld is the one I'm familiar with, where it's the basic unit of magic.

Tim Burget

> What does doing your job have to do with being happy? No, never mind. Oh, come on! You were so close, Thomas! That was the correct question to ask, and then you told her she didn't have to answer it! > once I'd mentioned stabbing, she froze up again, shuddering, looking almost like she was in physical pain It wouldn't surprise me if she actually *was* in physical pain. > The shuddering ceased, but this time she took a little longer to recover, not immediately answering my question. Probably because she was too busy forgetting your previous question, Thomas. Well, the first part of the chapter had some disturbing implications. > Also, while I'm investigating your dream, I'll enquire with Minister Denis about transferring official ownership of Mary Huh. Now *that's* interesting. Maybe Christine knows about the plot to kill Mary, so she thinks she won't have to follow through with it? Or maybe she thinks transferring Mary's ownership to Thomas will make Mary dying that much more impactful? If nobody knows what mana is, I bet the explanation does indeed have something to do with "thaums," whatever those are.


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