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Chapter 386 - Tark

🕑 Added 2025-09-29 16:00:23 +0000 UTC

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SirPavlova

I haven’t watched House of the Dragon (still too salty over the final seasons of GoT), but your comment made me think… don’t *all* prequels leave you where you started?

Stephen

Following up on Minitel & Unwilling's comments, it is far better to speed up than slow down. I really like the way you're moving the macro (nation state alignments) by way of the micro (conversations between 2-3 people). It let's you cover all the important points then skip ahead without three chapters of people walking down a road or discussing what they're eating (yes, I'm looking at you GRRM). Finally, whatever you do, please, for the love of [insert your choice here], DO NOT do a House of the Dragon and spend a whole season (book) to end up where you started!

Minitel Embezzlement

It's "which rolling snowball will start the avalanche". Totally see what you're talking about, but it seems inevitable for this story to hit a "WTF, so much is happening!" point. Like WWI, where Gavrilo Princip single-handedly mobilized 9 national armies in 8 different wars. Just in case, I'm mocking the way WWI is taught, at least in the U.S. That said, I really don't see how this story gets away from a mild run-away of events. It's that or some sort of extreme anti-climax. The order or church moving against the Erisian crown and Checkov's Princess escaping to Dungeon Factory might just do that. Talk about power throuple!


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