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PftA Book 3 - Chapter 37 - Surprise Trials

🕑 Added 2024-06-13 20:03:46 +0000 UTC

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Anne-Marie Mills

Emie thinks, "I wanted to spend time with my family and watch my niece and nephew grow up". Shouldn't there be some plurals there in reference to the niece(s) and nephew(s) because there is Amie PLUS Bell was having twins, wasn't she? [I don't recall the twin's sex(es)]

Mike G.

Huh, I was sure I’d seen that when the 5 day week was mentioned, but I agree, I can’t find it in book 1 where I thought it was…

David Brims

For the record, I've gone back and checked and there is no mention in the current versions of either of the first 2 books or in the chapters of book 3 to this point of either the 50 minutes per hour or how many hours there are per day in Alliance time. Any mention might have been cut in editing at some point. In other words, if it is not explicitly spelled out in this chapter (and not in a note at the top), it will create confusion once this chapter becomes part of a book (with no chapter notes).

Procrastination

Right. She only made it to Tier Four before.

Arkeus

Mmmh, now that she is tier 5, she is probably past where she was in her past life? She was tier 4 then right? Also lol, Niall really wasn't a compatible partner in the party lol.

RedThyra

Tyftc

Procrastination

I'm making minor changes to book 3 to fit the shift. Ch. 35 and Interlude 6 both saw some modifications. Nothing big.


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