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PftA Book 3 - Chapter 16 - Repercussions

🕑 Added 2024-03-25 21:09:56 +0000 UTC

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Adurna

It is a bit jarring after having put other assholes on an island previously. Perhaps the island prison might gain from a bit more reflection noting how their targeting of her is not not leaving a threat that can fester. Otherwise, perhaps a reflection on how banditry is different from assassination plots in this chapter, before she has acted on it.

BrGustl

Didn't realize that our MC is "cold blooded killer". She never mentioned truly killing someone and tried not to kill any of the ones she teleported away on earth. Either her past was a bit more bloody or she has a good ability to disconect or she tries herself at playing big girl infront of her koheis

Borindak

I don't always comment, but still reading and really enjoying the story. Thanks for continuing to write!

Arkeus

The new guy is going to be a friend aren't they...


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