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PftA Book 2 - Chapter 42

🕑 Added 2024-01-16 00:23:34 +0000 UTC

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BookDragonling

She has more patience with her parents than I would. Just move their stuff to the apartment and burn their house down. Can't live there if it's burnt to ash. She should have killed the people attacking her. Much simpler and no chance of them getting free and hurting others.

BrGustl

Mhh, its a bit much smooth sailing or omitting/downplaying issues though I don't think its bad writting, I assume thats just transitioning the stageplay slowly away from earth? Though I recommend to not shoot to much pulver away. Its better to focus on one thing and maybe mention some things later or make a special edition. I don't know how you plan to make the dungeon happen, but special episodes of her reminiscinding could be integrated.


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