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PftA Book 2 - Chapter 37

🕑 Added 2023-12-28 20:19:41 +0000 UTC

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Braid

She was always going to leave Earth as soon as the portals opened. We'll still cover some of what happens between the apocalypse and the portals. Book 3 won't start until she's in the Realm Dungeon.

Michael Maor

This is disappointing. Not the chapter itself, it was up to your usual standards, however the entire story up to now was setting up dealing with the events after the portal open and Earth changes and now we suddenly pivot to instead leaving and effectively not coming back with the story leading to her adventures in the Realm dungeon. I'm sure that will be an interesting story, it's just not the one I was promised.

Anita

I can't wait to see the dungeon. There's still around 6 months for emie until the portals open, so Justin will have to survive on his own until then. And with time dilation, who knows how many years it actually is for Justin inside. I just hope the equipment they'll work in the deal will be enough. Also, please don't change Justin too much when he'll reunite with emie. That environment will change him for sure, danger and lack of safety for a prolonged period of time. But don't make him lose his empathy or humanity. Fighting and killing will make him harder, but don't turn him into a block of ice. PS I love your work. Keep up the good work .


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