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PftA Book 2 - Chapter 33

🕑 Added 2023-12-11 22:22:06 +0000 UTC

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Skylar

Happy Holidays! Thanks for the chapter 🎄⛄️🍿

Braid

Thanks for pointing that out! I didn't catch that.

MehGyver

I would recommend revising one sentence in particular. Your use of the word "sight" is incorrect, as that spelling applies to something which is seen. You want to use site, which denotes a location. Current sentence: “We’re at the first portal sight in North America,” Stella replied. Proposed revision: “We’re at the first portal site in North America,” Stella replied.


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