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PftA Book 2 - Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2023-10-14 18:41:15 +0000 UTC

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Avdrdr

Well considering they hide what time and fate do to protect/abuse them it’s probably ok. It prevents some politics from being applied

Braid

There are still a couple of years until the reintegration. After the reintegration, there will only be 3 months before portals open.

BrGustl

Thanks for the chapter. I think your doing great! Though one thing. Would it be possible to make timeskips a little more - well - obvious? Don't get me wrong I like the way you do it so far by intwgrating it into the writing/stoey, but I realized that you tend to do many timeskips, , even if just small ones, its exceedingly hard for me to keep track of the time. For example I was surpised when I realized its just a few month before the reintegration. Considering she still has to do buisness with her old friends its probably just about to happen or however she plans to accomplish it otherwise some random time between 2years before reintegration. Makes me doubt my understanding of the timeline so far, espacially when we soon don't even have the reintegration as a landmarker to help us keep track.

Hunendora

Eh, not a fan. Get stuffed, dude. Way to remove someone's agency. "You're my disciple now and gonna join my sect. You're so blessed cause I said so." I'm sure there will be no resentment.


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