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PftA Book 4 - Chapter 30 - A Necessary Discussion

🕑 Added 2025-01-14 02:32:09 +0000 UTC

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Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Jessica

Though I hated that Justin died and her parents divorced, it fits with the time away and the stress of "losing" your children.

FaMa_Tarapax

and how exactly is she supposed to kill a peak tier ten time mage as a mere tier eight? Besides, in the end she did come out of this nightmare way stronger, smarter AND better equipped.

Tiffany Miller

The time skip is what bothers me i hate this one. The assassin shouldn't have been able to do that

Mike G.

Fair, but I think I'd probably stop reading if 26 years had elapsed and that many people were all still perfectly happy and together - that would be harder to believe. And I don't really want this fic to turn into a _Mother of Learning_-style endless time loop.

Tiffany Miller

Like she should go vack in time kill the assassin before he touches her

Tiffany Miller

Justin dying is bullshit the assassin taking her with no trouble is bullshit. Not sure I'll keep reading with her brother dead and family basically destroyed


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