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PftA Book 4 - Chapter 24 - Testing

🕑 Added 2024-12-20 03:50:43 +0000 UTC

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Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Avdrdr

The assassin is going to be on the receiving end of all the leftover munitions once she escapes. Poor him, test target for a master enchanters collection of weapons

The butler did it

thanks!

Procrastination

I’ll adjust that bit for clarity.

Mike

Thanks for editing Interlude 3 (Anya's POV). I am liking Anya again.

Lukan

Yeah, I noticed that too. Probably just a mistake of who's saying what.

The butler did it

Did anyone else get confused by this section? It reads to me like Lisa went from saying she's not moving quickly to she is. I crossed my fingers. “Here’s hoping. It would be great to get rid of one of the bosses this early.” “It’s been seventeen years. That’s not really early.” I huffed out a mirthless chuckle. “We both know it is. If I wasn’t an Enchanter, it would have taken literal centuries to gain this much firepower, even with my three affinities. Killing one or two of the weakest beasts at a time would have eventually gotten us here, but now that we can set up kill zones and have some real oomph…” “It is far more effective,” Lisa conceded. “However, I still maintain that seventeen years is not much time for the amount of progress you’ve made. Even in the dungeon, you wouldn’t have progressed this quickly.”


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