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Your Mistress is pleased

🕑 Added 2025-01-30 11:02:53 +0000 UTC
Your Mistress is pleased

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Trinian

Thanks for those thoughts, I do try my hardest to ensure continuity and a plot that makes sense, but for some reason, Slave to Love ended up being a bit of a mess and I'm not sure how. Perhaps the fact that I was rushing it in what little free time I had bled through. As far as originality goes, blackmail is just too easy a plot device and one that I don't intend to rely on again. Perhaps another angle for Madeline ending up on top would have worked better, but it was also quite an old idea that's been in the works for a while.

Jacob Freeland

Hiya, I'm a little late, but wanted to give my feedback. I thought this update was somewhat less polished than the normally outstanding work you do; judging from what you wrote in the previous post, it seems you won't be surprised to hear that. The following stood out to me: Madeline seems to imply multiple times that you took advantage of her sexually on the first day, even if you didn’t. At the very least, she implies that you actually did once and several more times that you wanted to. I would have liked for there to be a choice for Missy to decline sex with Madeline on the first night because she doesn’t want to force herself on a slave, rather than merely because she doesn’t feel like. (While Missy is perpetually horny, she also is/can be rather compassionate, so it seems to me that this reasonably falls within the bounds of her character options. I know Madeline expresses interest, but being a slave, she can’t be trusted not to be lying to garner favor with her mistress, which Missy generally shows enough social aptitude to realize.) This choice could set a flag that adjusts the dialogue I complained about above as appropriate. If feasible, it would also have been nice if there was a flavor option for the player to comment on Chloe after first meeting her, similar to the option to comment upon discovering the address in the fake deed. I appreciate that it would be difficult, perhaps impossible, to do this without giving the player ideas that could be spoilers. Upon leaving the kitchen after serving dinner naked to her family, Missy can immediately reenter it, and all the characters are gone, despite Missy being the first to leave. It would be good immersion if reentry was blocked until the end of the next scene, with Missy commenting something to the effect of: “I don’t want to be seen by my family like that any more than I must.” As you noted in the previous post, there weren’t enough generic nighttime sexual service scenes. Because you can be enslaved a minimum of three nights, I think three would be a great number, but even just one more would be a vast improvement. There were a couple of bugs related to how Madeline and Chloe appear after being turned over to the guard, though both seem to have been reported on Discord already, so I won’t elaborate here. Those were the polish issues; it’s nit-picking, of course, which I wouldn’t bother doing for most people, but your work is excellent enough that it feels warranted (perhaps perversely, haha). I do have one, more fundamental criticism, which is that I didn’t find Slave to Love to be a very compelling story overall. It was basically the same premise as Reign of Jess, except your enslaver is forcing you to be a prostitute instead of trying to break your will, which is a) less frightening and b) not really a new experience for the player (cf. Delivery Girl, Best Friends with Benefits). It felt to me like there wasn’t really anything new and interesting about the story; however, I recognize that I chose the only outcome (turning her into the guard) that doesn't lead to something without precedent in the game, so I dunno. Make of that what you will.

Frank Baum

The update was awesome. I think you can be happy with the poll result. Looking forward to the next chapter!


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