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🕑 Added 2023-07-14 03:16:03 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

This is how we get vampire chickens.

Steven Robert Henderson

I have to wonder about the "Icy Vein, the vampire becomes more emotionally detached." Right now she thinks of her feathery friend as family. I can't help but see a future that Sgt. Fluffyfeathers becomes a blood snack once she becomes sufficiently detached...

Mr. Bigglesworth

Remember she was a small child. Children's logic never does make sense.

bradyman50

Thanks for the chapter, At first I thought SGt. Fluffyfeathers was a weirdly named cat, and understood why she would be so devastated at her family eating it, but a chicken is a bit much. I love her having a pet chicken, It just seems weird that she would hate her parents over eating a chicken. Basically every culture worldwide has raised chickens for food, and the idea that they are too important to eat is a result of modern urban culture. Anyone who is raising animals for food, would have taught their children that they would eventually be eaten. You can love an animal as a pet and still know that it's eventually food. It can be difficult for some people at first, so her being upset makes sense, but not to the extent that she seems to hate her parents because of it.

bradyman50

Her life was going nowhere, her best option, the one Eve interrupted, had her working as a spy until she was caught and killed in at most 20 years and having to work hard and sell her body to support herself while doing so. There are almost no happy endings in cyberpunk worlds, and if she picked someone who was already about to die, there's a greater chance she would lose her investment, same if she picked a kid who would have to grow into their powers. In a world like this, everyone except the super-elite are one unlucky break from death at all times, and if she picked some rich kid, they would be less likely to agree and more likely to be noticed. If by some bizarre coincidence, there was someone in the same boat, who failed to get into school naturally, they wouldn't have been as a good a candidate. And finally, all Eve did was stop her from getting into a school, the school wasn't her goal, surviving was, and Eve gave her a better way to do that.

Andrew

Find someone who's life has just been utterly destroyed There's thousands of people every second like this who has the skills you need(No running lives and no blowback from when they learn you ruin their lives and Then they trying to kill you)

Andrew

Only 1 problem with this there's a little flaw eve ruining the girl's life


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