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🕑 Added 2023-06-15 04:37:52 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

Ty, I went to cook before Grammarlyizing it :(

Federico

Some errors, I am using the mobile app so I can't copy and paste them and I am going by memory: when it's describing the fact that there aren't bandits, last paragraph sentence you used "and" instead of "an". When describing the impact of Eve dress on the hall change "woman" with "women"

Mr. Bigglesworth

Had to split this in two, it just grew :(


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