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🕑 Added 2023-05-10 06:55:52 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

*nod*

ShadeByTheSea

This is what I dislike about fanfictions, if you don't know the work it's based on well you'll miss a lot of subtext. It's hard to avoid this issue as an author too because it's hard not to assume the reader already knows things. The main reason I enjoyed this chapter is because Eve is cool and Madeline seems well written, but any subtext I was suppose to get from the house names and the like are completely lost. I kinda remember the names but not really anything about them. Fanficts can be well written peaces of art, but they're build on an idea that the reader already knows about the subject matter.

Lorraine V

You need a clock accurate to the second as well as the astrolab and compass for complete navigation. You need to know the time of sunrise or sunset compared to you reference point of longitude location

Mr. Bigglesworth

I've forgotten to date it but it's a little over a 1000 years. I'll get the date put in again correctly.

Thefluffypuppy21 Lol

So far, how long has eve been on this world?


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