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Daphne's Marriage Escape (Ch. 2 - Malfoy's Nightmare)

🕑 Added 2024-05-08 02:13:20 +0000 UTC

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VeelaTrouble

Thanks for the comment :) I have an endgame Harry/Daphne in mind here. In regards to Draco and Harry's social standing I imagined that Harry, while certainly having enough money to not work, wanted to make an example as a hard working man and be a leader in rebuilding the magical society after Voldemort's defeat. The point I was trying to make was that doing desk-work was not exactly what Harry had in mind when he envisioned rebuilding society. In regards to Draco, he's not richer than Harry by any means. But while Harry has decided to work for a future he believes in, Draco works for himself. And since Harry is the Man-Who-Conquered and certainly a more popular man than Draco at the moment, Draco loves to get a one-up on him whenever he can. While these thoughts are in my head, I realise that I have failed to convey them adequately in the story, so I'll make some changes to make these things a bit more clear. Again, thanks for the feedback! I'm still working to improve as a writer, so I appreciate all the help I can get :)

Robert

Is there an endgame Harry/Daphne here or is he just enjoying her while trying to help? Also a little confused as to how Draco regained any social standing and Harry is kinda toiling away - seems like your underselling Harry a bit here at least from a financial standpoint, he has Sirius’ inheritance from the Blacks on top of the Potters wealth - anything Draco could have scrounged up would be a drop in the bucket comparatively


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