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Written in the Stars - Form the Shadows (Part Two)

🕑 Added 2023-01-29 14:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Lee McCusker

Well, in this one, Albus saved Harry. He did not perform inadequately. He's and old man and does not have the elder wand, something he did have during the first war, and he barely managed to hold Volde ort off even then

Rand

It's getting pretty annoying how in every one of your stories there's a fight between Albus and Voldemort. Albus always performs inadequately and is saved by Harry. I'm not quite sure how at this point in time Harry is able to perform better than Albus. I think this is one of your flaws. Harry never gets to a point of failing. Against the Dark lords I mean. He always draws or succeeds.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

This was an amazing chapter, as per usual. I can’t wait to read the next. Now that Voldemort’s exposed himself, things should turn far more interesting.