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Written in the Stars - An Unexpected Ally

🕑 Added 2022-11-17 14:01:00 +0000 UTC

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elisabetta violi

I hope for Lucinda and Harry! Daphne is fine as a teenage romance

odzoo

This one was caught on Discord and added to the beta's Word doc, but I appreciate you pointing it out. I do occasionally see a typo mentioned in these Comments that wasn't caught on Discord. Thank you for your help.

Sunny

Nahh this is tight on Lucinda, wtf Mr McCusker, haha! I'm curious how you will veer the storyline away from canon and the conversation between Gellert and Albus, along with Remus and Sirius, was nice touch. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Orion Nebulous

I’m on team Harry/Daphne and I hope you’re not just teasing :)

AlexanderR

Whew - this was a long one. A lot going on here. I'm wondering if Dumbledore was just saying he would help Harry so that Gellert would drop it. I'm sure Dumbledore can interpret "helping" Harry as many things.

Shaitan

Just wanted to point out that MOD Harry could have immortality and therefore be a great match for a certain vampire. Just saying

Bellerophon

Seeing as he’s quite happy abusing Tom’s knowledge he got from the soul share I can’t see him having any moral issues accepting the help from Grindlewald.

thevolunteer

During the part Albus and Gellert are talking, there is a typo. You wrote “that not” instead of “that night” when talking about the power he knows not.

Sayantan Roy

yea i couldn't login either... maybe a temp glitch. Anyway good to have the story pick up pace :D

ellen

I’m honestly so worried about the next task, I hope Viktor will be okay. Is Harry really going to return to Durmstrang if Voldemort does come back? I have a feeling he will stay in Britain. But his friends…hmm, honestly I have no idea where this is all going and I am as apprehensive as I am excited.

RyanMK666

I’m both dreading and anticipating the next chapter, I am worried with what you’re going to do with the final task, but you’ve never disappointed in a major plot point in all your stories just yet, so I’m just going to wait with baited breaths. Looking forward to Sunday.