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Written in the Stars - Hogwarts

🕑 Added 2023-03-12 14:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Eric Lachance

The polyjuice ploy was pretty awesome. Harry killing Voldy in an ambush makes sense and is too rare.

Maxime Ingouf

Great chapter to conclude yet another outstanding story!

Justaguy33

This fic was great. I especially love the vampire culture little as it was because so few fics include vampire of werewolf culture. I also enjoyed the additional sentient magical races added such as hags and elves.

André Ferreira

I kind of liked the way u offed voldemort. I was not expecting it

Rick Malone

Yeah, I’d have to say that this story just kind of petered out for me. I thought the Durmstrang parts were strong, but once he left the school everything felt kind of rushed and unimportant. Anna and Eleanor felt like they could have stayed for their 7th year at Durmstrang and not impacted the story at all. We don’t see Pansy’s reaction to Daphne’s death, the elemental magic stuff just kind of went nowhere, and the final battle was underwhelming. Overall I love your writing, and are more than thankful with your consistent strong posting. Unfortunately this one just didn’t hit for me. Maybe I’m spoiled by your other excellent stories!

Yash Patwardhan

I really hope you haven't forgotten about the Harry Evans part of this story.


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