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v5c68: Beginning to Feel Like Victory

🕑 Added 2024-11-13 05:37:53 +0000 UTC

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Andrew Carter

During the chapter where Jin is nearly taken advantage of by the drunk girl they take her back to her room. On the way they meet a woman with “the most impressive chest Jin had ever seen” she mentions having a daughter who hasn’t been getting her letters and a husband with the prettiest eyes she has ever seen (which is something dad of grass told Tigu his wife used to tell him often) it is not explicitly said but heavily hinted that this is Xiulan’s mom.

Madster

I’m sorry I’m a bit lost; who is Xiulan’s mom in SHI?

john smith

Oh. My. God. That's GREAT! obviously from the other descriptions on him, a more ruggedly scarred version, but yes. Iskander and chun ke, red headed bro-chads.

John D Jones

@ Caoimhín The "decapitation strike" requires them to actually find the head they want to "decap." That's probably going to take awhile. Figure the "military campaign" is going to proceed some offscreen for a bit and then Ge and the other will come to Fa Ram to rest up, resupply and cry in envy at the beauty/wonder of Fa Ram with a lot of "I cannot believe that Jin built all this in the Azure Hills in just three fucking years!"

Caoimhín

Yeah, I know. Sorry, I think I didn't express myself properly. What I meant was whether they would go to Fa Ram after the decapitation strike or if they would only visit after the military campaign hunting down the demons related to Yulong has been carried out to a certain degree. Because that's what would determine when Shou can finally see Jin's farm and get his heaven-mandated garden orgasm XD

Rose

The only thing I can picture when chun ke is described is Iskander/Rider from fate zero

Andrew Carter

Maybe next book. it’s just one of the things I am looking forward to

John D Jones

@ Caoimhín Think about how government/military forces deal with insurgencies/terrorists in our own actual world. Now add xianxia weirdness to that. No, hunting the demons is not going to be a "one and done" thing.

Peter Gerganov

I doubt she is. From a story pacing point of view it doesn't make sense to dump all of these events one on top of the other. I expect we'll set the plot hook if/when the dumdums recognize Lanlan as their friend's daughter, but I don't expect a teary reunion in an epilogue/wind-down chapter

Andrew Carter

I really just want to know if mom of grass is on the SHI ship. we know she was at SHI did she come back to protect her home?

Angela Roberts

Caoimhin, hunting the demons is definitely going to be a thing, a next book thing for sure.

Alex Ingraham

One must cultivate the ability to only tear at the eyes! Do not give the onion ninjas the satisfaction!! 😉

Alex Ingraham

I don't know why she wouldn't eventually manifest a bloodline, but it's gonna be plot dependent. CF gave himself all the room in the world with Nezan's explanation of bloodline manifestations... I'm just hoping he doesn't explode her... 🥺

Alex Ingraham

HOGFATHER!!! Death: "Small child, what are those things tied to the end of your hands?" *small child looks down* "Glubs?" A very Chunk Ke reaction and wholesome interaction lol. I miss Terry......

Caoimhín

That's kind of how the aftermath of disasters is, no? A rollercoaster of emotions as the various things following the event unfold. Being happy you survived, mourning those who died, salvaging what you can, getting help from authorities, lots of moments of introspection and dealing with the trauma, and deciding what to do and how to carry on with your life. I think it's been handled great by CF, especially how it's showing the different POV of people with different circumstances and priorities in the aftermath of this event.

Caoimhín

That also raises the question of how the counterstrike operation against the demons is going to proceed. Is it going to be something done in a couple of chapters of decisive overwhelming force or is it going to become a hunt of various bases? Are we going to see it or is going to happen in the background? I think that's a factor to decide whether it will be done in this book or the next, which will also determine when Shou's garden orgasm will happen, as they are likely to carry out the attack before visiting Fa Ram.

Rake1810

That’s a completely fair point. I’ll counter with being impatient 😂

Anime Problem

It does just dump power into the dragonviens right now it actually broke a couple of the repairs it doesn't heal that's the problem if she was healed fully it'd be a different story I know it's unlikely to happen i just think if you kept her a secret and just explained it's a formation to repair the land and return qi to the qi desert they wouldn't question it enough for it to matter

John D Jones

@ Rake180 I'll be fine with it. The various reactions of the CSS, SHI and the Herald to Fa Ram feels like something that needs to be somewhat expansive. This book is winding down. I'm fine saving some things for the next book.

Jenneke

This chapter feels out of place, a tonal dissonance. We just had the emotional release after the fight ended, everyone's recovering, etc. And then a swerve back into building tension as the sects and the Herald arrived, a feeling that things are getting bigger and more intense... And then we get this feel-good chapter giving me whiplash.

Rake1810

I honestly think if we don't get Shous reaction before this book ends it'll be the first time in all 5 books that CF has done something I'm actually disappointed in.

Baqc∞ART

and also Minyan, that Meimei makes fun of her for being a tsundere and that Xianhua offers her a rope

Baqc∞ART

He may have been a very devil, but Lu Ban's behavior was a standard Xianxia young master, perhaps in the reconstruction arc of the shrouded mountain where they look for new parameters of conduct, that will be questioned.

leopard eye

Me too. Sometimes it just comes back again. I really wish that great genius could have stayed with us a little longer.

Seaspike

"Garden" ha! The lotus is running rampant in the bathhouse while the volcano ginseng is growing in the fireplace. Shou may end up puking blood...

Laura Hemly

He's still closer to a reindeer than Chun Ke, in other form, with an antler tied to his head!

Mark Greenberg

Large? Wikipedia says the average reindeer is 47" at the shoulder while the average moose is 91", so that's like one reindeer standing on another one's back!! And aren't spirit moose larger than Earth moose (or is that meese?). I know Spooks is young but he's still described as large. Does anyone remember how tall he's supposed to be?

Mark Greenberg

Include Yingwen & Fenxian with Delun & Tigu. Jin explained Shen Yu's absence by saying "Gramps is holding down the fort" but I wish he'd added "along with Tigu and some of our new friends", that way everyone's location would have been addressed. Given all the CSS guests it makes sense for some of the family group to stay behind and oversee things.

Mark Greenberg

In v5c62 Minyan thinks about the fact that the Windward Blade is a small ship with only two ballistae and fifteen crew. Why do you say there are 30+ people on board?

Mark Greenberg

Don't forget Spooks is a moose, not a reindeer, though I suppose he could play one on TV.

Randall Brynsvold

Dried persimmon, and I assume that each piece is a half a persimmon. A winter treat that Chun Ke and Pi Pa enjoy. Go back a few chapters to "v5c59: Musings of a Sword": "The boar noticed Shen Yu‘s gaze and smiled at him in silent acknowledgment. He nodded back at the boar, who went over to Spooks, Han, and Shao Heng and began showing them his assortment of nuts, lichens, and dried persimmons, much to the Thunderhoof’s pleasure."

Luke H

For sure, brother. I just love the image of Jin carting his entire family into town, laughing all the way while the thunderhoof trots beside looking amused.

Alex

It’s important to keep in mind that Rags and Loud Boy are on their way with Biyu; that’s going to be a thing since it was Fenxian who broke Loud Boy’s Dantian.

Joseph Guillory

However since you brought up Asura's Wrath ... how about Augus as grandparents? I can't imagine him any different when he's in battle mode

Osvaldo Antonio Carmona Calderón

We need Shou garden orgasm! We need him to completely lose it! 🤣

Joshy14-06

And the story will spread and will make other people think of their old traditions and what effects they might have.

John D Jones

Feels like we're winding down to the end of the book and we probably won't get the Shou garden orgasm reaction until the next book. I'd like to see Yingwen going through a bit of a crisis of faith in the next book now that he's pretty much been forgiven/accepted by Fa Ram. I mean, the dude was basically the second in command to a demon for over a year and didn't spot anything too weird about it. That's got to prey on his mind.

Emily Gurnavage

Damn, I actually had to get a tissue for my tears with that ending. Also: "Somehow, some way, his dance had helped, and had brought back the sun. Just as all his ancestors before him had sworn." I think the importance of that tradition has been slammed back home again for the next few generations. The old stories fade in importance eventually even with retellings, but now a new one exists, with renewed assurances that the tradition is more than just a dance.

Emily Gurnavage

Yo MAMA is unedited !!! OOOooooOOOOooOooHhhhHhhhhh (Idk why I had to do that but the urge was strong lol in fact that sounds like it could be a compliment)

John D Jones

@ Luke H I mean, once Spooks sees Chun Ke pulling children around in a sleigh, he's probably going to DEMAND to do it because it's fun. Meanwhile, Master Forest Sweeper is going to be really puzzled as to why Spooks is wearing a red glow-stone on his nose...

Laura Hemly

Chun Ke wouldn't have the man boobs, though!

Laura Hemly

I thought the Torrent Rider was with them, too. Unless he's gone home to check on his village. And perhaps Tie Delun has gone home, too? Although it should be mentioned somewhere in the story if that were the case. Perhaps CF will mention them in a future chapter.

this will work

I can't wait for the 4th book coming out don't even care if I'm technically ahead I need the physical copy

Havefeith

You've got something missing in the paragraph "The others, emboldened, immediately surrounded the two. Chun He gladly let". It literally ends there. Good chapter. Love the human form introductions to the Hong Village.

Corwin Amber

'Chun He gladly let' <- broken sentence?

Hoobs2

CHUN KE LFG

Paul Boros

Imagine Susan showing up then Grandfather shows up wearing the hat.... I miss Terry but this imagery makes my soul feel better

Paul Boros

Hogfather!

Truedragon5374

Ahe probably does have a dragon bloodline. But it's possible she will never awaken it. It could have very specific conditions or it could skip generations

Truedragon5374

She has not been mentioned yet. But there are 30+ people on that boat and we only have 3 of thier names so far. So hopefully...

Truedragon5374

Papa Boar 🐗

Luke H

Jin finally has a reindeer but would never insult the noble thunderhoof with a yoke. Chun Ke is basically Muscle Buddha. Happy solstice everyone!

Old Dog

As always, thank you for a great way to start the day with a chapter from you.

zdm

I can always count on this story to make me feel something in my heart.

Taylor Hayes

I'm guessing one of the larger eastern varieties over the western ones. Though I am mighty fond of the western persimmon pudding.

Angela Roberts

I vote Hogfather.

Angela Roberts

Don't know why it keeps getting so dusty in here, sniff! Chun Ke is Chun Ke! And sometimes bravery looks like dancing. Aw, right in the feels!

Taylor Hayes

Had the same thing happen to me.

Alice Blake

Well I didn't expect to wake up this morning and cry happy tears, but here we are. Thanks for the chapter

D J Meigs

🎶Here comes Chun Ke, here comes Chun Ke, right down Bei Be’s lane. Jin and Spooks and all their friends pulling on the reins.🎶

Caleb Bear

It's hinted in one of the alternate universe chapters where Jin's grandpa sent him to Soaring Heavens Isle rather than the Cloudy Sword Sect

WarStrider72

Nice to end the Solstoce with presents! The Chun Ke express is ready to ride!

Josh Meneely

Great Chapter. Not sure if it's been mentioned before but in rereading the books Sun Ne mentions he hasn't been able to compare cutting flesh and maybe that's whatade the cuts bad. He has now, and I wondered if that will come up.

Justin

She's with them? Is that said somewhere?

Swinter

It's a type of fruit. :)

Aaron

Also pretty sure he is the first one to do the second dance without assistance from the previous Xian.

Alibhai

Fights? Probably not. karaoke? Definitely.

Aaron

and he had had to get up a 'had needed' might flow better?

Just A Dude

Chun Ke = Santa confirmed! Or would that make him the Hogfather?

Sean Ulrich

Persimmon?

TempestK

She kind of has. Those antlers made of steam and the dragon's breath attack are merely signs of how her Cultivation has been aspected by the steam engine.

Stuffed Duck

Xian only mentions the people he doesn't know/recognize. I assume Tigu, Handsome Man, Washi, Bei Bi, Gou Ren & Xianghua are there as well.

Angua de Blubb

I mean, with how things are going ... Washy and Chyo's kids teaming up with Xian the Younger's kids seems pretty plausible to me ...

WonderBread459

That’s an important person, nobody outside of the dums dums were mentioned as having come with Minyan. I’m sure if she came, Jin or somebody would’ve mentioned her.

Angua de Blubb

Loud Boy and Rags are currently on their way north with Biyu. After the Soaring Heaven Ladys went into quick mode over Pale Moon Lake City and exploded all the Qi-sensing crystals at Mengde's, Biyou offered to go north and ask Gou Ren for help (since she thinks Yun Ren is still in the Fangs). It then said that fortunately, there was someone available to be hired as guards, and how glad she was to see Mr.s Loud Boy and Rags again :)

Curtis Earl

I am laying here in bed at 5am, silently crying.

Caleb Bear

Did Xiulan's mother come with the Soaring Heavens Isle group?

M e

Aren't Loud Boy and Rags escorting Biyu from the city? There were the disturbances at Pale Moon Lake City from Cloudy Sword Sect and Soaring Heavens Isle passing by, so Biyu was going to go ask at Jin's even though she thought Yun Ren was still gone.

Redbeard

Loud Boy and Rags returned to the gang’s fortress if I recall right, they didn’t come to Fa Ram like Delun and don’t know about the attack.

Joseph Guillory

I was thinking of a thicker in the waist Iskander from Fate Zero or like Ganon from A Tale of Two Kingdoms

Fluffy druid

Shouldn't the title be "it's beginning to look a lot like victory"? At least I think that's the song.

Cranky Otter

I love how Chun Ke & Pi Pa accessorized traditionally for the jaunt to the village.

Cranky Otter

the spiritual herbs also like his dancing

Golden monkey

Yeah weren’t loud boy and rags there too. I guess they don’t have much of a connection to Chun Ke so they’re reaction isn’t as important but I would like to see it still

Cheuk Hin Ho

Must be holding the fort with Tigu

amin johari

As long as Chun Ke doesn't start wearing white leisure suits and get into more fights per meters travelled a la Kazuma Kiryu he'd be alright.

Caoimhín

I think I just found the character that looks the most like my mental image of Chunky: Honda Tadakatsu from Tenkaichi. https://www.reddit.com/media?url=https%3A%2F%2Fi.redd.it%2Fom06xq658j4c1.png

K

About bloodlines... doesn't Xianghua have one? It would be nice, if she was the first to Awaken bloodline of Lord of the Lake after the Falll.

Caoimhín

Wait, now that I think about it, where's Tie Delun? Did he leave off screen? Because the last time he was mentioned he was at the farm with everyone, but now everyone gets mentioned except him.

Truedragon5374

Wait, wait, wait. Chunky is a huge, muscular, rotund man covered in scars with a big beard. Who can grow to the size of a mountain whenever he wants? ... ... Chunky is a non-asshole, teddy bear version of the Great Wyzen from Asura's Wrath!

Namorat

Ah yes, my obligatory BoC tears while riding the train.

Kat

Me too!

Harish

Red and Blue do a good job of summarizing stories but some of the nuanced details are lost in the telling. Still, it is a good place to start. Thank you for the recommendation, Fluffy Druid.

Fluffy druid

Overly Sarcastic Productions has summaries over on YouTube. Unfortunately the series is infinished, but it serves as a look into the story.

Harish

I did not know about the Stone Monkey lore until you pointed out. The In-universe explanation might be that that origins of Sun Wukong as a Stone Monkey might only be known to a select few. I really need to read Journey to the West at some point.

Jon Dough

Thanks for the chapter!! Another great one

Patanahi

Tftc CF !

Patanahi

Definitely not us!!

Idan tal

😂

Trevor Mergen

Thanks! Great chapter!

STORRM

man that last bit hit me right in the feels

Caoimhín

That's kind of what it does already. By pumping power into the land to empower Tianlan, it helps her heal faster. It's also better to keep it secret from as many people as possible, especially from mighty cultivators from outside. Tianlan preferred to keep her presence and nature hidden from the sects of Azure Hills in the memory crystals, so it's highly unlikely that she would trust people from out of province. It's honestly better this way, with people dancing because of tradition and the goodness of their hearts.

Caoimhín

Hong Xian the 78th breaking Solstice-related records each time. 1st year dancing: first time ever a Hong Xian lasts the whole night dancing on his first dance. 2nd year: first time dancing while riding a steam locomotive. Also, casually triggering the Province-wide formation and helping turn the tide against demon invaders. What is that kid gonna do on his third year dance? At this rate, to one-up him, his descendants are gonna have to dance while riding in the air with dragons or something XD

Caoimhín

Interestingly, Xianghua has always said that he looks like Sun Wukong (and his characteristics as Stone Monkey match that myth) but nobody else has associated him with Sun Wukong.

Auralia

Im not crying… SOMEONE is, but it’s not us!!

Peter Gerganov

lol, never let perfect be the enemy of good enough

Laura Hemly

Thanks you, CF, for another chapter that makes me feel like I just got a warm hug from the whole Fa Ram family!

Lanter

He didn't? Oh lmao, well he's a large cervid in the general vicinity of a moving sleigh, CLOSE ENOUGH 🤣

taukid

“I’m annoyed that people were right all the time. We really are a monkey and a fox.” Should "all the time" be "all along" I'm pretty sure

liam funk

wife fight back

Daemion

Except he didn't, he pulled it himself and the "reindeer" ran by his side.

Cam

You’re not the only one. I am too!

H

I needed this today. Thanks

Björn

I always get teary eyed when I remember that they are all still dancing because they swore they would. They haven't given up, even if noone of them remembers why they started in the first place.

Julia

I'm not crying you're crying.

Cj

Because if it was related to the great sage equal to heaven it’d be a massive deal and not just a minor power up. Plus there are other spirit monkies besides him. Like the miners that would make a lot more sense

Nathaniel Jacob moore

Don't know why but the end section of dancing because they swore to do so, and upholding the importance made me misty eyed.

leopard eye

In my mind Chunky sounds like Paul Bunyan.

Beggar of Freedom

Divines bless your kind heart!

Harish

I remember that Xian the Younger was slowly developing the "Sense of Smell" that Meimei had in some of the early chapters but it has not been mentioned since. CF might need to take a look at that. The discussion on bloodlines was simple and easy to get but considering that Gou Ren is a monkey and Sun Wukong is supposed to be a well known myth, why are none of them making the connection? This was a much needed chapter and it is definitely looking like 5 or 6 chapters away from ending this volume.

RedFaux

Ride wife. Life good.

Alex Ingraham

Amazing chapter! Damn onion ninjas made happy tears well in my eyes, but I did not give them the satisfaction!! Glad that one kid had their priorities straight and confirmed that the sled rides would continue lol

Steven.Riske

A Gou Ren chapter and he finally has a conversation with Nezan! I know Nezan is more interested in foxes and he’s not really their direct uncle, but I found myself wanting them to talk to one another.

Lanter

It took a few years, but Jin finally has a (thunderhoof)Reindeer pulling the sleigh!

Zeromaru2

Xian the real MVP. The end of the chapter was like a warm hug

Ender419

Thank you for the lovely chapter!

Ryan

I am so glad Xian the younger got told how important his dancing was! I loved the village’s bit amidst the conflict and it’s nice to see them get their battle accolades as well!

Guber

Human form chunky with antler tied to head when!?

Aki_Iokua18

Thank you for all the good feelings you’ve been sending our way. Like Chunky said, when a chapter drops “life good.”

Anime Problem

It would be cool if they altered the formation to heal and sustain the land and dragon veins instead of just dumping them full of power they have a couple experts who could take a look at it who are set up nearby.

Sam a Goat

So bloody good!

Gigifiy

Just gotta do the Saiyan thing and wrap your tail around you like a belt Gou. Let the Inner Monke rule

Wolf Eiyn

I liked it, especially that last part was a nice touch.

Nicholas Tran

I love Chun Ke, he is the best uncle anyone could ask for

Xavier Harris

This story is one of the best stories I've ever read. I thank you for it.

martin m

A warm hug of a chapter to end the day!!! Thank you

Alex Ingraham

TYFTC!

Lynn Freeman

So cute

Jazer Andrew Sotomayor

Thank you!!


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