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🕑 Added 2024-12-19 00:05:34 +0000 UTCI've come back to reading and a couple of plot points got me thinking.
That made me go back to building plot, creating some brands, update the university taking out the door that was a mistake and fill up the corner with an interest point with elements that will enrich other areas of the country.
The new brands will help me to fill out backgrounds, build plot and have some fun. Some are purely fillers, like the Coffee Valley, others have plot studies references like the Siren, the Cherry Unicorn and The Rooster Choice (wrong in the render but fixed in the texture already).
One of them will be used as an a plot point for one of the Giantess Dream chapters that will come ahead.
On the original draft in the bar we would be a flashback with Tyson and the boys with other flashback within it and etc, going forward and back, but these things are really hard to understand, so, I'm scrapping it and lining up the ideas in a straight timeline (everything happening in the exact same time) with only ONE flashback that is missing. It is missing growth, so, it will be worthy.
The fixed chapter will bring Tyson with the boys in a place with these machines - that will be anywhere due to their utility - have some talk referring someone who is at Gianness City for a familiar encounter that ties the universes, we have their interaction, then flashback, then reality clashing, then Giselle with Gordon and finally returning to wherever the boys were in the beginning with some dream sequence. The chapters is taking shape, so, I'm looking forward to it.
See ya!
