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Consort of Destined Death Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2025-11-01 23:41:32 +0000 UTC

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Alkole

Really hope she doesnt tbh cause I cba too see her being anything other then a character that gets named in the background like lavender and parvati

travis btmb

Tftc

MyAfroAteMyDog

Hermoine aggravates me even in the books. Harry is honestly her only real friend. Ron and hermoine aren’t even that close. She abandons her one true friend in 4th and Harry just kinda forgive and forgets it cause Ron and hermoine are all he has. Kinda hope she redeems herself to Harry

Shammy2618

Really enjoyed this fic so far, and I’m looking forward to more. However, I can’t help but feel there is some much needed Harry/Daphne interaction /relationship building that didn't happen. I appreciate the fact Harry just straight up tells her he liked her. I definitely felt like they needed either some kind of cute/sweet moment of when 2 people confirm they both like each other and want more, or at least some kind of make-out session. As is it just felt way too much like a business interaction, which was a bummer. Also, please don’t go too big the Harem! Past lie 4 girls it just kills any characterization the girls/or the relationship can receive because it’s just some new girl every other chapter.

Hadrian v.E.

While other fanfics have stated the 2-faced nature of his so-called friends and sheeple, this is one of the few that touch upon the their deeper hypocrisy—namely that his supposed cheating into being selected as a Champion no longers matters as soon as he manages to perform well.


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