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Vol 7, Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2025-09-08 21:13:17 +0000 UTC

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HF3d3d HF3d3dHF3d3d

Hm, alright, I’ll rework it when I have some free time. Since I’ve already decided to gradually move away from using the present tense anyway, why not?

LOLZMAN

I get the tenses are hard I am just saying compared to the prior chapters, which were quite good and flowed well this chapter felt as if there were pot holes after pot holes jarring the flow of the reading.

HF3d3d HF3d3dHF3d3d

As for the tenses, I wrote a big comment about that on Royal Road. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/121310/spells-vs-shells-progression-isekai-kingdom-building/chapter/2573176/vol-6-chapter-3?comment=17443880#comment-17443880 But by the way, since then I’ve somewhat reconsidered my view and am moving toward completely abandoning the present tense in translation.

LOLZMAN

I feel that this chapter may need another look over as I feel the past tenses are mixed about. Was this when your glasses broke?

Johan Timmers

Tftc

LunarEcho

TYFTC

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Perhaps they use vampire horses?

Gabriel Melnik

Shouldn't it be caltrops instead of Garlic?


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