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Hornet 23 complete!
🕑 Added 2025-07-28 23:25:28 +0000 UTCAnother 2 in 1! Now Hornet 23 is complete for your viewing pleasure!
Like I said in the last post, I realized I forgot a few details in the last panel, so I added them in. Does it make perfect sense that you can see the cracks in the fall? maybe not, but I kept them anyway. I also fixed some of the shading, mainly in the second panel. And of course I added the dialogue. Not a whole lot to add to the behind the scene paragraphs that I haven't already talked about. So ill ask for what you think and leave it at that.
Comments
Sonia
The best Hornet expansion comic I’ve seen. I can’t wait to see her bigger!
tredih -
Id love to do more things to let the audience interact with the story. They really add something to it and serve as an interesting challenge. Trouble is that i already have a lot of ideas for Hornets Dream, and it wouldn't really be smart to set up a vote if im already more interested in one of the options. Cause what happens if they vote on something that I only found fun on at the time and needed to fill an option? Id then be working on a storyline that I might not enjoy as much. It would just make more sense to go with the one I wanted anyway. I could use smaller votes that wouldn't get in the way, but I would need to not make them too small, else folks might not find them nearly as enjoyable. tldr, id like to, and will if I think of a good one, but atm I don't have one. (in fact while writing this, I think ive thought of one! I'll have to post the vote on DA tomorrow)
Ten Eleven
I do wonder how she feels about having an ass and tits the size of boulders, once things stop happening and she has the time to reflect on it. Though that's not a question (since I imagine we'll see in time), more just a thought. I do have one question, at the very start of this comic you had a vote decide how the knight would make hornet bigger, do you think you'll have any reader-interaction elements like that in the future, whether another vote for what happens, or something else?
