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Shirokane Rinko (Part 1)
🕑 Added 2025-11-06 04:31:29 +0000 UTCHere's the first part of the next post. As I mentioned in the previous post, it was supposed to be ready for Halloween, but it got extended more than I intended. I will be posting 2 more pages as I finish them. The following parts should be faster.
Here's a preview of the next page.
Comments
CPT3
It was a fantasy hypnosis audio file and that was one of the things they tell you to visualize, so I'm not sure if that would be to your tastes.
Blood Lisan
Oh ok thank you O7
ET
I just posted three more pages
ET
I hope you like it!
ET
That sounds like something I'd like to see :O
ET
Thank you for pointing it out. I saw the obvious mistakes that were committed while I was editing the text. I did some further proofreading for details after that and updated the post.
ET
Thank you for your patience!
Blood Lisan
hello, will there be the continuation in a few days?
Danny Reyes
This is great. I hope the final product ends up well!
CPT3
In hindsight, I'm surprised spiral lollipops don't get used more often in hypnosis stuff. Seems like a fun idea but I've only seen it used once before years ago. Anyways, off to a promising start!
SomeGuyAlex
Its nothing too bad but the English definitely wasn't proofread
beanbap21
This is great! Thank you for the art!
