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THE TRIGGER 01 [20P]

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 13:31:33 +0000 UTC

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natyz

WOW, thank you so much for your incredibly detailed comment! I'm thrilled that you're interested in their daily lives and past. I really enjoy crafting detailed backstories for the girls before their deaths, during the time they were alive. That said, I try to refrain from making too many things official, as it might reduce the fun and imagination for readers like you. Whether they were in love or not is unclear, but they definitely shared a bond closer than friendship. Also, feel free to send me suggestions via PM! Just keep in mind that not all suggestions may end up being implemented. I promise to read everything you send and give it deep thought. Thank you!😉💛💛

Brodonlor

I can't wait!!!!😍😍😍

Brodonlor

Finally finished translating trigger 1's comment, it is too long, always thank you for your patience,😭the suggestions section will be send to you by PM later😭🥰

Brodonlor

Whether they were lovers or not, they are indeed close, and they could not escape the soldiers' killing in the end, a sweet but sad story 🥺But it maybe a some measure of happiness in them dying together, It won't leave one of them to grieve for other one🥺The parts they would never have been able to reach each other in depth would have been inserted and eaten by soldiers in turn,that's good(oh god, I'm such a demon😈, and so are you😈😂😂)But I think Saori looks cuter when she wore glasses,I hope you will to put glasses back to Saori on when Trigger 2 the soldier using her corpse, this is her characteristic🥺Your armed jk creations never fail to amaze me 🥰Your MusouJK work never ceases to amaze me🥰

Brodonlor

When Yuzuki and Yaori were both captured, they both asked the soldiers not to hurt each other ; And on page 11, when Saori hears the soldier's words, she does not first worry about Yuzuki's safety, but asks soldier what lewd outfit she is wearing, it make me laugh 😂I love this line,I can imagine Saori's shy and cute face after she hearing the soldier's description of Yuzuki's clothes 🥰And on page 16, the bodies of Yuzuki and Saori are placed together, one soldier say they look romantic; Am I right about their relationship?🤔

Brodonlor

I wonder if Yuzuki and Yaori are lovers? or did they have a crush on each other but were never together before they died?They live together in an abandoned school and spend time alone with each other, and their personalities seem to complement each other, in the introduction, Yuzuki is more cheerful and lively, and Saori is more calm, and it is also mentioned that they both want to protect each other; In the story begins,Yuzuki wearing only underwear and teasing Saori, Saori is shy and turned her head to one side and dared not look at her, I think if Yuzuki and Saori hadn't been caught by the soldiers,they might do something more that night? You know what I mean😘Too bad they can't do it anymore🥺

Brodonlor

And I love the lines of the this work, from the soldiers to describe the two girls before and after death, This time the story has a stronger connection to the introduction of the characters, the introduction, the lines and the actions of the characters constitute the complete character setting of Yuzuki and Saori and show the relationship between them.

Brodonlor

Here I come again😂 Yuzuki's death was my favorite part!she was caught by the soldiers in Pages 8-13, her bra was lifted up and her huge breasts out,The soldiers shot her stomach, toyed her as she is bleeding, and then raped her after her death, each page is a completely different picture, with different movements and expressions; I especially like page 11, when Yuzuki get the shot, her eyes wide in pain, and her mouth is pulled apart by the soldiers; and on page 12, two soldiers raped her while she was dying (or maybe already dead?), they use her mouth and pussy; and she died on page 13, her eyes half-closed and semen streaming from her mouth 😍😍😍Also love the corpse rape scene, but the action on page 17 is too much like the first page of Cecilia 1.5, only in a different direction 😂

natyz

haahahahaha next day, something good news comming up~ and new comic aswell comming up end of month~ please look foward it!

natyz

hehhehe thanks! Will their funeral be peaceful...? Or will their cold bodies be thrown into the dirt, forgotten over time...? I'm curious too

Ancient_Apple

oh.. what a great work... I want a funeral scene.

natyz

hehhehehe thanks!!!!!!!!!

Goldin

Oh...God......I love you It's taste good!!!!

Brodonlor

Thank you for your approval😭I have already thought about it. After I finish translating, I will post all comments on trigger 01 in this post, and the remaining suggestions will be send you by PM🥰

natyz

nevermind~ Don’t worry about it~! I’m always happy to hear your thoughts about my work. I’m sure others will also gain positive energy from you!

natyz

okay!! hehehee When you are okay, send me anytime~😉😉😉

Brodonlor

Yes,I follow you since your first work,II'm glad you remember me (Or maybe it's because I'm long-winded?😂) I have more to say for this work😭I will send you the rest of the suggestions for trigger 01 and other works in a PM in the next few days🥰😭My second account use same avatar,pls wait few days😭🥰

natyz

Thank you so much for your long reply! If my memory serves me right, you've been following me since my very first work until now. It makes me so happy that you like my work, and I'm so happy that you observe it so closely everytime. Thank you so much for me a message again! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Brodonlor

Saori is the loli character you draw first, she looks younger than Riese🥰Short hair and round glasses, small body shape, although the chest is not as big as Yuzuki but cute loli jk small chest is attractive too, she is so cute! 🥰I think you have a great success for first drawing of a character with glasses was !! I also like Yaori too🥰

Brodonlor

Yuzuki is a very special character, she wears the least amount of clothes in your current work, but it also shows her personality, she is more casual than the other characters, willing to let Saori see her wonderful body,I can see how close they are🥰I was fascinated by her clothes and big breasts😍she has one of the biggest breasts of any manga character and, like Cecilia, they look a bit like too😂But Yuzuki is sexier when she life, wearing only sports bra and panties. Her beautiful figure is on display from the start, and even the sports bra can't hide her huge and prominent breasts😍She's so erotic😍Lucky to find such a beauty girl in an abandoned school😍

Brodonlor

After a long and difficult time, trigger 01 is finally uploaded! Belated congratulations!😂You have a great progress in character design and graphics! I love both characters, Yuzuki, who is sunny and energetic and has a prominent figure, and Saori, she is petite and cute🥰

Brodonlor

Sorry,it's too long😭I have a lot to say or ask😭I will post part of the comment here, and send the rest to you in a PM using another account when I finished translating the rest.I am afraid that my long comments will affect other people's reading😭

natyz

🥰🥰🥰hehhehe Thank youuu!! okay~!!!

Brodonlor

My comment is editing, please wait me for some time😭Even it just a comment about trigger 01, I still have a lot to say😭Thank you again for your patience🥰😭I love your work so much😭

Brodonlor

你tmd我又笑死了🤣🤣

natyz

日本のCold eyesの皆さんへこんにちは、natyzです。昨日アップロードされたバージョンの日本語翻訳を少し修正しました。内容に問題はありませんでしたが、段落の切り替えやスペースの使い方に少し違和感があったようなので、一部のシーンを修正しました。再ダウンロードしていただければ、より読みやすいバージョンをお楽しみいただけます！ありがとうございます！愛しています～

natyz

hehehehehehehe! TY!

MEGAGardevoir

master work

natyz

🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Thank you! hehehe yeah, I think that it was a good idea!

113225

Cute characters, sweet story, and sad endings. That's really good! 🥰 Even though wearing sportswear, still wearing equipment and gun holsters. That's also excellent!🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰