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Amazon Apocalypse 4: Chapter 43

🕑 Added 2024-10-16 15:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Nate Steadman

From the sounds of it Carter may just catch the attention of the immortal king

Vorsayo

This is your best series so far. I haven’t finished Spellheart as the last audiobook isn’t out yet, but damn I’m already more emotionally invested in this series than I was Theo’s. It really shows how much you have grown as an author, I can see your writing getting better over the course of spellheart but this new series and the fresh start it afforded you has really let you stretch your creative wings. I’m as invested in this story as I was HWFWM before the plot stopped progressing. And DoTF has just taken way too long for Zac to advance and seems to be dragging along which is why I’m not up to date with it either. But in this series you have hit the perfect balance of advancing Carter’s power and moving the plot along. Keep up the exceptional work man!

Trebuchet

I just saw there’s a spellheart 10 lol Well now I have more reading

Marvin

Awesome! Thanks for reading.

Trebuchet

Haven’t read your stuff since finishing spellheart, finished these ones in a week or so. My fav of your work by far! Thanks

Marvin

Yeah, he can definitely make more use of the Samhain Clan in the future. Just not right now.

jmundt33a

Won’t he be getting married to a B-grade Swordmaster in the next volume? Hello?? Why not embrace training with and from Cyra once their relationship stabilizes?

whyme943

Liking the training montage thing. Gives us nice Quick Looks at various points around the world, and it isn’t moving too fast or too slow. Not sure I’d want a ton of this, but ~once a book (or a bit less) is good for me.

NovaZero

Or nepotism. Like getting granny to give him some pointers

Marvin

We will get to that before the end of the book.

Vorsayo

Huh, exciting but also nerve wracking. I’m so worried about what Cyra is up and the competition to see who will be her mage commander or protector or whatever it was the competition is for.

Marvin

We'll get to part 9 pretty quick. The last quest is much longer though because it has some plot relevant stuff in it. That one will be most of next week, depending on how I divide it up into chapters.

Vorsayo

Are we going to see the end of this quest line by the end of the week?

Marvin

Yeah, he should get more formal training at some point. It's just tough to justify a B-Grade trainer showing up to give Carter swordsmanship lessons at this point in the story, because that's what he'd need. It won't happen until he's more active on Glacia, at the very least.

Marvin

Yeah, the reputation is from the people Carter saved. C-Grades don't spring out of nowhere, and the average C-Grade has at least some friends, family, or other form of support network that would worry if they went missing.

Nate Steadman

That sounds like really cool appendix info

Marvin

He will definitely think about that.

SethRxz

Damn, Carter is courting death it seems

jmundt33a

Doesn’t he have to get the cultivator pearls tested to make sure they’re balanced and non-toxic before he ingests one or distributes them to allies? There was a discussion about properly spacing Pearls and what poorly made ones could do to harm those who ingested them as a Level shortcut. Is this an example of such material?

jmundt33a

Was anyone looking for Tharandul? Were his experiments suspected? I figure the reputation is from the victims Carter saved. He seems to be doing a pretty solid Lone Ranger act now.

jmundt33a

More training! One spar with Cyra will not cut it. He needs better blade work and a more thorough examination of his basic abilities. He’s being thorough, but he’s almost fully embraced the Ken Titus school. “Just go do it!”

jmundt33a

Evil cultivators. Good ones might have a better way of doing things. Disturbing that that last guy was A. Still listed as a Healer and B. Looked like some sort of Santa/Dumbledore combo. For a second I thought the Sydtem was going to put him against Galbatorix and we’d get a lesson in how deceitful it is/can be. Saving that for later? There’s some editing cleanup for this one.

jmundt33a

Please do.

Marvin

Yeah, I'll make a big final list at some point. It would make it easier for me to keep track of things, even if it doesn't end up in the story. I can share it with you guys from my notes if it doesn't show up in the main text.

ArbabSB

At the end will we get a quantification of the buffs Carter's improved Death Defier title gives, plus any other additional reward abilities?

ArbabSB

Huh. This is interesting. And finally a hint at the enemy that the Amazon elders and Glacia are fighting. Cultivators, the system's enemies. The system has thus far pitted Carter against evil cultivators willing to do horrific things. But it also facilitated Carter's cooperation with another cultivator, the Goddess in Jade, by quantifying her blessing to him as a system ability. Interesting how it could quantify the cultivators' power in the system's format, with levels and so on. Bodes well for Carter's hopes of utilizing cultivation methods to improve himself. These last couple of quests were too close. But the rewards were well worth it. Seems like the system gives Carter the choice to opt out every three quests. Pity it doesn't give him a heal every three quests too.

WhiteRabbit

Reminds me of the cancer ray https://youtube.com/shorts/oZigoSzLMLo?si=-baEnhc-vjB3bbln nasty stuff

Mistweaver

Although the quests are a bit of a distraction from the main story, they are quite interesting. When they are done, let’s see Carter’s new stats. And an update on Cyra would be great.

NovaZero

Godamn cultivators. Get off the system's lawn!


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