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Chapter 344

🕑 Added 2025-04-28 19:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Robert Wallace

"he was out in public desperately trying to expose himself to as many people as he could." This is hilarious quote out of context.

Radek Homola

Eell, she could just be a super arogant bitch who is from a small noble background and as such compensates her own fragile ego by thinking of anyone who isnt as someone less so she can distract herself from the reality that even though she is a noble, she is unimmportant.

Lucas

Tftc. I don't understand why the woman helping Julius wouldn't give the couple the necklace. They would have had to know about the prices after they entered the shop (spatially enchanted, enchanted items, etc), and maybe they just like simple clothes. Also, like a lot of people think in the comments, they could be high tiered people hiding their identity, so it just feels wrong to simply ignore them. Maybe I'm just being optimistic, but I don't think an employee would just ignore customers, especially with aura supressing techniques and stuff. I know this was written to build on Julius being a good guy and making a good impression, but it feels unrealistic to me.

Kyfe

Nah, he was just intrigued by it, but he wasn't willing to chance the main purpose of his Skill, seeing everything around him, because it's integral to everything else about his build.

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Tyftc

John Poland

Prob so the reader gets the image of the store just as he walks in to make more of an impact on the reader

Oskar

Thanks for the chapter 😁

John

Didn’t he choose spatial calculation originally? Was this changed or am I making things up lol

Yair Ron

"julius looked over where she was pointing" Why did he need to look over? This chapter is specifically about his spatial perception. U r trying to give us a sense of how overwhelming it is, and the language here really reduces that, at least for me. I think something like "Julius paid attention to the store she was pointing at", which is intentionally a weird sentence to say with human senses, would work better. Furthermore, why does he only see the jewelry after he goes in? Is he limited by walls? If not, maybe move some of the sequence around a bit, have "he was stunned at what he saw" before he "ushered them in", and only then describe the actual store.

Christopher Leland

Lol I was think more assassin's, jokes on me just normal peeps?

Hamfist

To be fair, the comments section does not automatically refresh. There have been many times when I have checked and saw nothing but in the time it took me to write my comment others beat me to the punch

Mundane

I love these little tests to see who reads the comments before they comment. Typos might give a doubling of redundant information but get math wrong and it will be a 7x increase in redundant comments.

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

TFTC!!! At some point I think it would be great to get a sort of anonymous POV of the people hunting Julius down so we can get a snippet of their motivations for taking out his family as well as to add some additional foreboding for their official clash. I would love it if the mastermind behind it all is ridiculously strong like a Tier 6.

retrorocket0

Now i want it to be irene's parents lol.

Ken

If the range increase by 2x, in a 3 dimensional space it would be 8x the volume

Amanda

Ooooo excited to see who the mystery couple end up being! I’m thinking Lily’s parents though my brain did go royal couple? for a minute but then I thought no they wouldn’t be so laid back i don’t think. I’m glad Julius is making a good impression not even knowing who they are! He’s a good kid :) / not quite a kid ya know what i mean lol. Thanks for the chapter!!

Hamfist

Could be Liiy's parents. Could be Helen Cromwell's but we've never actually met her so that seems odd. Aubrey has been working hard but we've never heard anything about her dad. Could be the emperor but like another commenter said, we've never heard him described as the doting type. Could be Tia's parents, maybe? Would be funny if it's Irene's parents and they said that they were getting a gift to make her feel better because she's depressed after being beaten by a first year.

Sloth

I thought this for a moment as well, but from Julius’ conversations with Reinara I kinda got the sense her parents weren’t of the doting kind. She never did or said anything to suggest they had a relationship like that, in fact I kinda got the vibe that she was in conflict with her parents. Though I can’t really remember what was exactly said to be fair, so idk maybe it is her parents

Cody

I'm going to guess the couple is Lily's parents

CodeBeholder

I was gonna say it’s Lily’s parents in disguise, but that also makes sense

Prent

Calling it now, that’s the emperor

IAMather

Definitely Helen Cromwel’s parents. She’s been working very hard lately to win the tournament.

11037

People commenting on the math mistake, but consider: maybe the reason Julius had trouble getting a space concept is that he is bad at geometry? Clearly, this is lore.

ElJako98

Well. I came to comment on the math, but I see others beat me to it.

Hamfist

Did you miss the husband and wife who were shopping for a gift for their daughter?

Connor Charlton

I came to comments to mention the sphere increase would be 8x not 2x but it seems everyone else had the same idea haha

Chad L.

lol. I guess we are all math fans too.

Silver Beard

Kinda soft chapter- thanks for sharing. Still waiting for the invite to the tier 4 rifts his friends agreed to explore.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. The “they got sucked into” in the final paragraph seems a bit confusing… who did “they” get into a conversation with, Marcus, Lily is in the back, the lady at the counter didn’t seem like the conversationalist type, was there someone else in the shop I missed ?

lilcapt

Math is important

Conrad Manaugh

Sense mood swings and spells and formations and item purposes

Kai

If the diameter of a sphere doubles it's volume increases by 8 times (as the volume of a sphere is a factor of r^3)

Petr Pavelka

Just a nitpick - if radius of sphere doubles, volume does not double, it is 8 times of the original. Volume of the sphere is V = 4/3 π r³

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

ZeroL

“For example, the overall distance he could sense had doubled, which meant the information he was getting at all times was also doubled” Just a note that if it’s a sphere, doubling radius results in the volume of the sphere being 8 times the volume of the previous sphere. So the information he is obtaining is much greater than doubled.

wellwish3r

Just FYI the volume of a sphere does a lot more than double when you double it's radius. I.e. with a radius of 10 the volume is ~4200. With a radius of 20 the volume is ~33000. Units for the volume are cubed.

Tom Clough-Macready

The volume of a sphere when the radius doubles. The volume increases by 8x

Quentin Cozzi

I bet they are Lily’s parents.

Sloth

“For example, the overall distance he could sense had doubled, which meant the information he was getting at all times was also doubled“ If distance is radius, then overall information should be at least 4x, not 2x. And that doesn’t even account for the fact that his perception is a sphere, not a circle

Niclas Elmers

Tftc

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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