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Chapter 336

🕑 Added 2025-04-18 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Conrad Manaugh

Who else in top 4 hmm

matthew strong

It characterizes polux quite a bit. If pollux gets left behind and forgotten in a month or two then maybe it could be removed or have the opening scene joined with the previous one but right now it's too early to tell.

Detrox

I kinda felt like nothing happened in this chapter. I understand that we can't have fight scenes all the time, but from an overall view, if this entire chapter was deleted I don't think anyone would have realized.

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Tyftc

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Btw: He could blame her though. => He couldn’t blame her though

James Short

This sentence when he is talking to Polux doesn’t read right: “It would just weaken the more you prolong it.” It makes it seem as if the fire would weaken over time rather than what the rest of the paragraph implies, ie. that Polux would be burned and weakened as a result the longer he was fighting her up close.

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Edit suggestion: He could blame her -> He couldn't blame her

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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