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Chapter 458

🕑 Added 2025-09-09 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Carsten Bak Larsen

I agree. It seems that Ryn is trying to convey "This guy is a badass". Someone who is "badass" in my opinion would be someone strong and brave. The mistake here is to think that someone who is reckless is brave. Reckless people are just idiots. And not even charming idiots, just a danger to themselves and others. Brave people are those who can do what needs to be done, despite the odds, despite their fears. A certain amount of recklessness is not unusual in a teenager like Julius. It is up to Ryn whether Julius unlearns it before it is too late. But a grown man should know better.

Thaabit Rivertree

The " i might have killed him, that's life" attitude seems very out of place. Julius is clearly important to Derek and Cain. Taking a risk like that that has a chance of killing him seems so out of pocket. What would he have done if he actually died? Cain, Lily, Derek. I mean it just feels like a risk anyone of his stature wouldnt actually take, especially when he risked offending Cain. Basically, this makes me as a reader really dislike him, or it wasnt worded properly. Just casually crushing someone to possible death (in his own words) feels both stupid (considering all the fallout) and callous, unlike the Zeniths we've known so far. If he believed he couldve stopped it before then or Freya would have stopped him it would have been better to mention that.

Nikhilesh

Duke Zenith is Tier 6 or Tier 7??

Corac

Yeah there are three people its irritating that he hasn't told the full story to. Cain, fraya, and the princess. But great chapter.

Starkly Glim

Thanks for the chapter! And that better have been a lunchbix cookie. I want more lunchbox food descriptions! Eh hem, aside from all that, I do want to see them actually complete the apprenticeship formalities before the tournament starts. Also, as someone else mentioned, when is he going to tell Cain and Freya about his family?


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