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Chapter 408

🕑 Added 2025-07-12 19:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Lance Wheeler

Let's get this party started

Read Isekai

I wonder how the upcoming tournament in the capital is going to factor into all of this, will Doren be coming to pick him up for that? 🤔

Amanda

Wow!! Exciting he can get some specific and top tier mentorship especially with someone actually having a phoenix concept like Julius!! I would also be pissed if someone destroyed my bathhouse. Glad Julius is getting more of a blank slate introduction!! Thanks for the chapter!!!

Hamfist

“That would probably just make things work.” Did you mean "worse?"

Hamfist

"Speaking of Freya, the woman who had been lounging was now standing up, and in a flash, she was next to Julius, her beautiful face close to his. " "Once Doren left, she stood up from her chair and motioned him to follow her. " When did she sit back down?

fabrice

But than he can’t compete at the tournament :/

RedLeaf

That'd be a very "Julius thing"!

ItWasIDIO!!

Where's the "another one" for this cliff

JazBird

Ok, sufficiently freaking out.

Abe 7

Who wants to bet Julius is going to have showdown with Cain just to see if he could??

Noah James

Training arc! Bet he’s a tier 4 in less than 15 chapters

Zach

YES YES COME MENTORS ONE AND ALL! TFTC!

Grayvisc

Looks that way. How many years is he gonna spend here? Throw in some time dilation maybe?

William Johnson

Thanks for the chapter, but some editing notes. This bit: [Doren sighed in defeat. “Okay.” Then he turned to Julius and passed him something. “If you need anything, break this token. I will be there in a split second,” he said before heading off back to the gate. He didn’t even give Julius the time to argue that he hadn’t agreed to stay. "Wait, how the hell is this an equal exchange?" Julius asked as he turned towards Freya. "No offense, but it seems like you are doing all of the work here." Before she could reply, Doren patted his shoulder. "Don't worry. Just as having someone with a Phoenix Concept will help you learn. She will gain insights from examining you. In fact, she will likely gain more out of it than you will. So, it's a pretty good deal for her," he explained before taking another shard of ice to the face.] Doren walks away and then is suddenly at Julius’ shoulder. Also, I think “Just as having someone with a Phoenix concept will help you learn she will gain insights from examining you” is a complete thought and can be one sentence. After the break here you have some pretty rough pronoun use, I think this sentence: [Once Doren left, she stood up from her chair and motioned him to follow her.] Would read more clearly as “Once Doren left Freya stood up from her chair and motioned for Julius to follow her.” I think this whole end bit could do with an editing pass. Again thanks for the chapter, all editing suggestions coming from a place of love and gratitude for all the work you put in to these chapters.

Apollion

Dojo Arc!

Alexander Zeheter

Tftc

Dylan Sutton

Training arc!

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. BTW: just make things work. => just make things worse.

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Tyftc

Niclas Elmers

Tftc

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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