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Chapter 182

🕑 Added 2024-10-19 19:00:03 +0000 UTC

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I do hope we get some progression in this delve chapter, part of me is hoping for things to go slightly wrong, and for Julius to actually need to flex in this delve, I have always found the "MC hides his power" trope a bit monotonous.

Zach

I agree, could potentially be Julius takes his new team to some of the others and then they get ambushed? Or sometime with grace and they learn the actual non suppressed Julius strength

Ryan

You're right it sounds much better that way.

Kyfe

Just a little constructive critique: typically, it is worded as "one of, if not THE, best..." instead of the way you have it, which is "the best, if not one of the best." It has a different vibe when you switch it around. One way is saying, "You're in the top three, probably even number 1," whereas the other way kind of has the feeling of, "You might be the best. You're at least in the top 3." Does that make sense? Changing the wording would make it seem like Julius is more impressed, imo.

Kyfe

I'm guessing this scenario will be at a later date in a different/more difficult dungeon. This one is setting up the foreshadowing for it.

BrdV

I think it COULD go that way, but I don’t think it will… The dungeon will be more challenging due to wearing the suppression bracelet. Plus, he will probably do what he’s been doing in class - focus on a single skill or two and getting better at them even if the bracelet makes it harder for them to rank-up… This seems to be his new training regime, so I don’t think it will be dull…

Thomas Corbin

I would think Julius would be bored in a beginner dungeon. I expect he'll sit back and watch a lot.

Sean

Why do I get the feeling Julius is going to offhandedly mention that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach?

Thomas Corbin

Hilarious!

Zack

🚌 Edgar

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Good to see him interacting with others in the class, and I like how the previous chapter setup this interaction with Tia. BTW: be able to his plants along => be able to help his plants along

A B

Edit suggestion: to make due -> to make do

Zach

TYFTC! Yes tia come make friends, just wait until someone almost dies and Julius goes full destruction mode in the dungeon (probs not but would be fun)

Oliver Reilly

I think the wrong word was picked Polux sighed. “I guess we will have to make due Polux sighed. “I guess we will have to make do

RedLeaf

Thanks for the chapter. Looks like Julius is adding "matchmaker" to his skills. :)

Arrogant Savant

Selling out his friend to recruit her lol


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