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Chapter 175

🕑 Added 2024-10-11 19:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Gerald Morris

Or maybe he turns into a spirit

BrdV

I’m wondering if it’s Drasil who helps save him l, maybe by helping him to advance/get a life concept (or maybe kind of IS his life concept) so he gets the Phoenix concept… I just hope Drasil makes it…

Gerald Morris

The "oooh what's that" was strong af

Gerald Morris

I hope tomorrows chapter isn't a cliff hanger

Raimondas Caponka

I think will be legendary skill , as mentioned early it's super rare to get

Torauth

Think this is how it'll go. What I'm wondering is - just how long will it take? Is it instant, or will it take days, weeks or maybe even a few years? Is anyone other than Alice have to go through grief before he's miraculously back and in perfect form?

Derek Walker

Julius clearly is reviving but it’s not clear how drasil survives. I also wonder if his will skill hits the threshold as well

Sean

Well, Fawkes I guess he's dead. Guess I'll go read Scion of Humanity instead, I think in the new chapters he's making a branch headquarters in Phoenix, Arizona.

Amazon Shopper

I would appreciate it if you rewrote the second half of the chapter to add more tension/psychological elements. It’s way to obvious what’s going to happen and doesn’t feel very high stakes(obvious this is where he gets upgraded phoenix concept rising from ashes, but I feel it could def have been done so much better) still I rly like the story just think this chapter is rly important and could be done better

mechanizedbush

Tftc! "Okay, Joel" -> missing quotation mark "That’s it?” " -> extra quotation mark "his spatial skills" -> "her spatial skills"?

Abtist

Guess it's all over. Surely he wont....rise from the ashes with a Phoenix concept of life....

Zack

If it were April first tomorrow, I could see that being a prank chapter of epic proportions

webolive

That would be funny but well everyone know what's going to happen...

Raimondas Caponka

End story is very unlikely, author so much invested."Nah tired of writing time to end" 😁

Amanda

ahhhhh so excited for tomorrow’s chapter!! what an ending

11037

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CapeShifter

It would be really funny if the story just ended here and julius is actually dead.

BrdV

Yeah - I agree that’s much more likely, but I can see that there are alternatives available…

Gerald Morris

Just fyi. The word you should have used is detonated instead of exploded

Detrox

Yeah, it was a cool final episode

Connor Charlton

Well he sure did experience death, so good job Alice

godkill 99

I agree maybe not a hundred years but either a couple of years or a couple of months at the least

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

Nail biter!!! This was an intense chapter. Thanks again!!

Voral

He said last chapter that he didn't want to get in contact with anyone with connections to his identity in order to not reveal it to the pursuers.

BookDragonling

The MC knows a captain of the guard and yet gave no thought to knocking the criminals out and taking them to the captain.

Voral

Finally, time to rise from the ashes and achieve a True Phoenix concept! TFTC!

BrdV

I went to the beginning/prolog to see if this looked like his first death (dark void consumed him), but it’s not… I don’t think this is the end of the story, but I do think this would make a good (though very annoying) end to book 1, as long as it’s followed by a good epilogue that gives us some information… Don’t forget that he had Jasper control the dimensions between worlds, and he blacked out then. Also, Jasper was convinced that someone scarily powerful had arranged for Julius to be reincarnated… So the way I see it, it’s possible that Jasper saved him, or his benefactor saved him, or he connected with phoenix enough to save himself. I can’t wait to continue reading…

Zenty

Now give him the concept, but have him reincarnate hundreds of years later : ) Stupidity should not be rewarded, he gets to live but loses all his connections. Sounds fair to me. Well, I can wish.

Read Isekai

Time to gain the concept ashes of rebirth or something along those lines

Kyfe

Nirvana Rebirth. Literally requires one to turn to ash. I was wondering how he was going to do it, as I didn't see Julius disintegrating himself, or his 2 minders allowing him to, but now the question has been answered.

Kyfe

I dunno, Alice literally said his ashy remains were down there.

Davi(d)

Hate the cliffhanger, especially because the fact that he was turned into ashes (which was said multiple times) + his skill leveling up 100% means he's getting the Phoenix Concept and the Epic skill

StarFox

Lol pretty obvious what's going to happen.. too bad we gotta wait for tomorrow to see it, unless Ryn has mercy on us.

Lucius Patrick Watson

Next chapter will have just two words "THE END".

Mitchell Prevost

Good ending!

Kevin McKinney

Wow. I have to wonder what Julius will do when he finds out Alice was involved with all that …. Not that he can do much against Alice.

BrdV

Maybe this is the way to finally heal those old burn-scars on his arm…

11037

I guess that's that. He's definitely not coming back, for sure. Who's the new protagonist?

Lukke Sweet

So glad it isn’t a Saturday cliff!!

BrdV

When I finished that chapter, I was hoping for a double-post-Friday…

PatronTurtle

Wild way to end the story. RIP

BrdV

TFTC… Wow… I was not expecting that… But, I think that somehow Julius will be reborn from the ashes… …or maybe he’s not really dead/burned-to-ashes? There’s a crater there, but could his spatial-connection maybe pushed him and a chunk of the forest outside the world? And it’s THERE that he will connect to a phoenix Concept?

TUSF

Phoenix time?

BlodWedd

Hey there Mr.Cliff we meet again :(

Niclas Elmers

Yeah i feel the same

TechX

That cliff is not cool

Raymond Mouton

Well… that’s a cliff on a Friday…

Puri Iresan

If he knows the guy is lying, why give him a Chance? Julius is so dumb some times…hopefully he grows up some time soon

Bloodorange17

He'll get a Phoenix concept and come back, that much is obvious, but whew this is quite the cliffhanger

Somebody

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