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Chapter 174

🕑 Added 2024-10-10 19:00:06 +0000 UTC

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D H

A little too convenient... Not sure I agree that these people go after a random Samaritan as it doesn't really make business sense and they seem to be part of a business focused underground and the guy they beat up was not really a member so much as paid help. Of course they are the big bad everywhere though I guess? idk I like the story but this seems to be super convenient that he runs into his nemesis and they are continuing to be evil.

Kevin McKinney

I get that, it was more to point out what could be a typo or such

Raymond Mouton

Wasn’t doing nothing is a “double negative” and will make your English Literature Professor very sad.

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

Oooo things are getting juicy! Thanks for the chapter! The plot thickens!!

mechanizedbush

Tftc! "soon he would be." -> "soon he wouldn't be." "The baldy wasn’t doing anything when" -> "The baldy wasn’t waiting while"? "wasn't doing nothing" was a little awkward sounding

Kevin McKinney

Nit and pick: The baldy wasn’t doing anything when -> you mean baldy wasn’t doing NOTHING when …?

Kevin McKinney

TFTC!

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Good tie in.

Sean

OoOoh! He found the edge of their crime ring! Will he fight it like some vigilante or sell the information to the highest bidder!

BrdV

TFTC… Now we KNOW that Duke Greyson is connected to the criminal element in Heston… I wonder if he will try and turn these guys over to the guards… Maybe call Declan over communication stone? Edit : or maybe turn them over to some scary Tier-6s that he knows?

Matt Corcoran

Back onto the plot!


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