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Chapter 287

🕑 Added 2025-02-20 19:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Hamfist

If you think that quote supports your idea that they think he is tier 1 then you have clearly misread it. That quote has Gabriel saying "...when he was in tier 2..." Notice he says "was". That is past tense, not present. He is saying that Julius used to be tier 2 but isn't any longer. I edited my previous comment to include a quote but you probably replied to me before I did that, but Kesla specifically says that Julius is in tier 3. And just after that she says "According to his records, he had only recently advanced before the incident happened." and she is obviously talking about his advancement to tier 2 since they don't know when he became tier 1. The idea that Julius advanced to tier 3 too early is a main point of their discussion so there is no reason to believe that they think he is still tier 1.

Hamfist

@Azril, I think you misread something because *nobody* in this story thinks he is still tier 1 and the adults in the first part of this chapter clearly know that he is tier 3. The woman Kesla specifically says "What are you talking about Gabriel? He’s just a child, while admittedly a child at Tier 3..."

Hamfist

Is it any less jarring than using a term like "himplegrabber"? At least we've all heard of a douchebag and can understand the implications of a person being described as one.

Azril Aditya

But all of the staff still though he's tier 1, not tier 2 or tier 3, except Gabriel. They are staff of a highly prestigious institution and the can't tell he's tier 3 already? I call it bullshit.

LobskiTheMagicLobster

It's cause of how he has to control his aura. The whole ruin effect means he can't release it without hurting people at or below tier 3 so he just keeps it controlled very tightly. It makes his aura feel like either a tier 2 or a tier 3 with an exceptionally weak aura.

Corwin

True. But he can learn how to make Rifts. And maybe some other things

Azulmar

Slang like douchebag can be a little jarring. It can be explained with a bit of mental gymnastics since they aren't speaking English (its just the translated equivalent).

Adrian Auriat

that s guy is crasy

Azril Aditya

How come they didn't know he's already tier 3? Is whatever technique he's using that strong that he's able to hide he's in tier 3?

gray matter

Idk that he will return for his second year. I imagine him leaving like Aden Easten did. All of his friends besides Grace are also graduating this year. He also already learned from Elder Han that the school isn’t really designed to actually help you with your path and abilities. Without his friends to spar with as secretive as he already is the school doesn’t really offer him much besides a secluded training area which dungeons also provide.

gray matter

Yes, but even along with that, Goldencrest is only protection while you remain at Goldencrest as well. She’s not the most self aware person ever lol

Conrad Manaugh

Its likely imo. He def wouldn’t have apologized if julian was a bad student. Also we both care as a thought experiment in a novel. So it matters as much as any other comment or thought here. It won’t matter but it would be dumb to redeem him if it did happen since he explicitly only treats people of high status well. Idk man your comment felt confrontational.

Andrew Logan

I love how you keep to your schedule religiously

Thomas Grimshaw

I might be reading between the lines a little too much but I'm gonna call it early..... Henry is acting mightily suspicious, like he may have had something to do with Julius' and the princesses disappearance. Not saying it was all him but that reaction tells me he knows something!

Oskar

Thanks for the chapter 😁

meu 32

Unlikely. even if he is, who cares. It literally doesn't matter if he is or isn't. They aren't suddenly going to become friends, at most casual acquaintances so if he is it won't matter.

Hassan Sarwat

Thanks for the chapter

Conrad Manaugh

He is still arrogant, just apologize cuz julian knows ppl

Tanner Lannister

“gotta say, Gabriel, I agree with Kelsa h” this was weird for me. We don’t know much but is Lucien also super laid back commoner speak like Gabriel? Vice Dean would make sense to be a little more formal “I would have to say,” unless the intention is to characterize him as informal and laid back

Hamfist

At the rate he's going he'll be t4 when he returns for his second year of classes.

Hamfist

The sentence may be a bit awkward but it seems to be technically correct based on previous chapters. He has a High affinity for Fire and Kinetic and it is difficult to cross the gap and fight up a tier regardless of whether you are talking about a tier 1 fighting a tier 2 or a tier 5 fighting a tier 6.

Justin

"He has a couple of high affinities at best and no matter how much skill he has, being able to cross the gap between tiers is very hard no matter the tier," Something feels off here, maybe it easier to see if you swap the end to this "no matter the affinity grade".

Reid Thompson

While "politics" might not exist there, an economy does. And pissing off the Violet family would be similar to pissing off Amazon to the point that not only could you never buy anything from there or have anything delivered to your house... most likely none of your known associates, none of your family, none of your coworkers could buy any thing or have anything delivered to their houses either. Other merchants would also be told that if they were caught selling anything to you, then they would be blacklisted too. See, that's not politics. That's money and people's livelihood, so Lily represents the absolute *most* credible threat out of anyone at that school, and this Kelsa woman is a fool to think otherwise.

Lukke Sweet

I cannot wait for Gabriel & Julius’ first spar after all this.

Adrian Auriat

no for stella i think he ll practice what he saw stella do for this space concept and got it through hard work and experience because concept is personal

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

A B

Edit suggestion: as a grain of salt. -> with a grain of salt.

Corwin

Makes sense how the school acted after reading this chapter. I wonder what Goldcrest will do if Julius makes T4 before he graduates

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

TFTC!

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Like the POV’s. I do kind of wish we had a scene with Julius and the gang on the beach discussing the meeting and the past few months of Julius’ life. I do especially like how Gabriel expressed his opinion regarding Julius’ personality and also skill level.

Zach

TFTC!

Zach

SHOUTOUT HENRY! Good for him, that’s a weight and heart demon off his shoulders, now he can progress. Shoutout Gabriel, you the goat. Shoutout Stella, because I know you will be giving us our space wizard somehow 🙏🏻🙏🏻

DB

Oh, I don't think Henry is really reformed, instead I think Henry learned just exactly who Julius's group of upperclass friends are...

William Johnson

A couple of editing notes on this one. Here: “I agree, but what do we do now?” Kelsa asked frustratingly. I think you wanted to say that Kelsa was frustrated, but this phrasing means she was being frustrating. I'd suggest either just dropping frustrating all together, or maybe go with something like "in fustration" or "raising her hands in frustration". Here: The boy barely answered any meaningful questions that we didn’t already know beforehand,” he said to Gabriel while rubbing his head stressfully. The way Lucien's statement is phrased implies that they didn't know the questions before hand. I think "the boy barely gave us any information we didn't know before hand" conveys what you're going for better. Also again, "stressfully" in this context implies that the head rubbing itself was stressful, not that it was done out of stress. I think the reason for the head rubbing is obvious enough that you can drop the stressfully entirely, but if you want something in their you could say "rubbing his head to dispel the stress headache he could already feel forming" or something to that effect. Thanks for the chapter, these suggestions are not intended to be criticisms writing as much as you do as fast as you do is going to leave some reasonable errors!

TheNorns

Thanks for the chappie! And glad to see Henry getting a little redemption, always nice to see people change for the better even when they're minor side characters (especially when Julian can sense his aura and tell that he's not full of shit and just trying to make up him for his connections)

Kevin McKinney

Good stuffs. Good dialogue and PoVs!

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Tyftc

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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